Re: Reworked introduction

On 6 Dec 2011, at 18:41, Melvin Carvalho wrote:

> On 6 December 2011 18:31, Henry Story <henry.story@bblfish.net> wrote:
>> So the latest version on my branch of the spec has a much shorter introduction.
>> 
>> 
>>  http://bblfish.net/tmp/2011/12/06/index-respec.html
>> 
>> The mercurial diffs are here:
>> 
>>   https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/WebID/rev/e63a5aeedc84
>> 
>> I reworked the structure of the document to move the terminology and the namespaces section out of the Preconditions
>> and into the introduction.
>> 
>> 
>> Doing this I noticed that we have section 3.3 the WebID Profile which should really be up in 2.2 I think. Or perhaps it
>> should be a section to itself, something like Attribute Exchange?
>> 
>> I think all we need is perhaps a Security section.
> 
> Looks good henry.
> 
> I think the introduction would benefit from saying:
> 
> - What is a WebID
> - What is the WebID Protocl
> - How they relate to each other

Ok I added that and put it online

http://bblfish.net/tmp/2011/12/06/index-respec.html

diffs

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/WebID/rev/7ef08977c8b0

Also added Kingsley's fix.

I'll look at it a few times again every few days to see how it ages.

Henry

> 
>> 
>> Henry
>> 
>> 
>> Social Web Architect
>> http://bblfish.net/
>> 
>> 

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Received on Tuesday, 6 December 2011 18:46:58 UTC