- From: Alexandre Passant <alexandre.passant@deri.org>
- Date: Thu, 21 Apr 2011 19:51:14 +0200
- To: jeff@sayremedia.com
- Cc: "Henry Story" <henry.story@bblfish.net>, "WebID XG" <public-xg-webid@w3.org>
Hi Jeff, all, Agreed with all your statements, but in that case, imo, there should be more focus on the USP of WebID, and less on the technical side. *What* can WebID offer, and *why* that's needed, rather than *how* (i.e. expanding the section 2, and maybe shortening 3) m2c Alex. On 21 Apr 2011, at 19:07, Jeff Sayre wrote: > One of the issues we faced in writing this paper is the 5-page maximum. As > it stands, the document (if printed) is five-and-a-half pages right now. > Therefore, we have no room to expand. > > The singular purpose of this paper is to pique the interest of the > committee that will choose the speakers. If we succeeded in doing that, > then we hope that we will be offered an opportunity to present a 20-minute > talk at the workshop. Assuming the WebID IG is offered such an > opportunity, we will cover certain details that, out of necessity, we had > to gloss over or simply leave out. > > So, when analyzing the paper, the question should be, Does the position > paper as it is currently written, present sufficient enticements to be > offered a presentation slot? > > Of course, we do need to make sure that we appropriately convey the > advantages and power of WebID in our oral presentation. So any and all > input is useful and appreciated! > > BTW Henry, last night I uploaded a corrected graphic for the certificate > picker screen. The most recent copy of our position paper on your site > does not have that change. > > Jeff > >> >> On 21 Apr 2011, at 17:40, Henry Story wrote: >> >>> >>> On 21 Apr 2011, at 16:56, Alexandre Passant wrote: >>> >>>> Hi Henry, >>>> >>>> I've added some comments to the google doc yesterday, do you plan to >>>> integrate them. >>> >>> I was looking through the history of the google doc changes yesterday, >>> but I can't find them. I think I saw them before, but my browsers >>> currently don't show me anything in those diffs. >>> >>>> I think we shall mention somewhere the ties between WebID and FOAF (or >>>> any machine readable data about the WebID owner) >>> >>> I do mention foaf once there. We don't have any space left there now I >>> think. >>> >>>> Since we're talking about identity, we shall mention that WebID allows >>>> (1) a user to give some of its information to an application (where >>>> s/he's authenticating) in a machine-readable form and >>>> (2) an application (where someone logs in) to deliver some data based >>>> on the identify and the attributes >>>> >>>> Multiple advantages: fight spam, contextual information delivery, >>>> personalisation etc. >>> >>> Fighting spam is there in section 4. >>> Does that cover what you were looking for? >> >> Kind of, but I think there should be more emphasis on it (using the >> previous combination) as part of section 3. >> To me, the tie to a "machine readable profile" is a key advantage of WebID >> that should be streghten here >> >> Alex. >> >>> >>>> >>>> m2c >>>> >>>> Alex. >>>> >>>> On 21 Apr 2011, at 12:51, Henry Story wrote: >>>> >>>>> New version with some changes: >>>>> >>>>> http://bblfish.net/tmp/2011/04/21/ >>>>> >>>>> The old one is here >>>>> >>>>> http://bblfish.net/tmp/2011/04/20/ >>>>> >>>>> Is there a web diff tool? >>>>> >>>>> Henry >>>>> >>>>> On 21 Apr 2011, at 11:26, Harry Halpin wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> On 04/21/2011 10:41 AM, Henry Story wrote: >>>>>>> Harry, are videos allowed in a submission? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Btw. doing a good video is even more work that writing a good text >>>>>>> out, as it requires excellence in an even larger set of media voice, >>>>>>> music, film, writing. >>>>>> >>>>>> Feel free to link to a video that you can show in your presentation. >>>>>> The video cannot replace a position paper, which requires text. >>>>>> >>>>>> HOWEVER, if you do get a video in with your paper, we might make a >>>>>> separate video part of the workshop homepage if enough people ping me >>>>>> with video requests. We've had about 3 others say this before. The >>>>>> idea would be people could watch the video before the workshop, to >>>>>> help start a conversation ASAP. We want people at the workshop >>>>>> primed and ready to go. >>>>>> >>>>>>> Henry >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On 21 Apr 2011, at 10:33, Alexandre Passant wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Links in the addendum or references sections or via anchored text, >>>>>>>>> as per normal practice. If you have a live link, you negate the >>>>>>>>> constraints of digital rendition of paper :-) >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Since papers can be submitted in HTML, embedding a video is also an >>>>>>>> option to make the case of WebID. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Alex. >>>>>>> Social Web Architect >>>>>>> http://bblfish.net/ >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Social Web Architect >>>>> http://bblfish.net/ >>>>> >>>>> >>>> >>> >>> Social Web Architect >>> http://bblfish.net/ >>> >> >> >> > >
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