Recommendations: "Apply library experience" - Antoine? from Tom Baker on 2011-09-08 (public-xg-lld@w3.org from September 2011)

From: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
Date: Thu, 8 Sep 2011 13:35:30 -0400
To: public-xg-lld <public-xg-lld@w3.org>
Message-ID: <20110908173530.GA11612@julius>

Antoine,

In the revised sentence [1], you write:

    By curating and maintaining datasets as truly linkable objects...

The datasets themselves are linkable, of course, but isn't the point here about
the "items in" datasets?  Alternatively, it could perhaps be written:
    
    By curating and maintaining datasets of truly linkable objects...

Tom

[1] http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_recommendations_page_take2&diff=6309&oldid=6293

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Tom Baker <tom@tombaker.org>

Received on Thursday, 8 September 2011 17:36:09 UTC