Re: Comments on Benefits section

Emma, I think it would read better without the quotes around the terms  
(e.g. 'dataset'). Those kind of threw me off, and I may need to read  
it again without them.

kc

Quoting Emmanuelle Bermes <manue@figoblog.org>:

> As agreed during our 2011-07-07 meeting [1], I just handled Dickson's
> review by adding a paragraph into the Benefits section. See the diff
> [2].
> Emma
>
> [1] http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/minutes/2011/07/07-lld-minutes.html
> [2]  
> http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Benefits&diff=5544&oldid=5499
>
> On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 12:39 PM, Emmanuelle Bermes  
> <manue@figoblog.org> wrote:
>> I have incorporated in the wiki most comments from Oreste and Felix
>> re: the Benefits section, see the diff [1].
>>
>> One comment from Felix that is pending : he proposes to replace
>> "cultural organizations" by "memory institutions". I don't have a
>> specific opinion here, but we should probably be consistent in the
>> whole doc and not just this section, so this is a question for the
>> group.
>>
>> Dickson's review is still pending [2] because I'm not sure whether it
>> belongs to the Benefits section or another one.
>>
>> Many thanks to all 3 of you for your contributions.
>> Emma
>>
>> [1]  
>> http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Benefits&diff=5223&oldid=5048
>> [2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-xg-lld/2011Jun/0085.html
>>
>
>



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