- From: John Boyer <boyerj@ca.ibm.com>
- Date: Fri, 23 Oct 2009 16:35:03 -0700
- To: Charles F Wiecha <wiecha@us.ibm.com>
- Cc: public-xg-app-backplane <public-xg-app-backplane@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <OF4D05D938.78FD4211-ON88257658.00797F6D-88257658.00818DB0@ca.ibm.com>
+1 The message is spot on and the content compelling. Truly minor edits: 1) Section 2, third para: "a Rich Web Applications." (remove 's') 2) "RIA" occurs several times e.g. in section 3 before we ever say "Rich Internet Application (RIA)" Recommend first sentence of Section 3 could be amended to fix. It seems OK to me at least that we also generally use RIA and rich web app interchangeably. 3) Figure 1 and other figures end with [D], where I assume D is short for 'more Details'. May want to spell it out because [D] looks too much like a reference citation (not in this work, but in other works anyway). 4) In section 6.4.1, there appears "ODF is an example of a non-XForms specification that today ...". I think we mean "ODF is an example of a specification that today..." (the rest of the content of that paragraph clarifies that there is an xforms model, and that ODF controls rather than xforms controls bind to it using the pattern). 5) Bold starts in 6.5.3 and never comes back out (under IE). Cheers, John M. Boyer, Ph.D. STSM, Interactive Documents and Web 2.0 Applications Chair, W3C Forms Working Group Workplace, Portal and Collaboration Software IBM Victoria Software Lab E-Mail: boyerj@ca.ibm.com Blog: http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/blogs/page/JohnBoyer Blog RSS feed: http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/blogs/rss/JohnBoyer?flavor=rssdw From: Charles F Wiecha <wiecha@us.ibm.com> To: public-xg-app-backplane <public-xg-app-backplane@w3.org> Date: 10/22/2009 02:28 PM Subject: {Backplane XG] Near final XG report -- Vote to publish requested Friends -- we're getting close :-) Here's the near-final draft with Abstract, front matter, patent policy, and hopefully all long-description links working correctly. Gregory, I don't have the heart now to go rip out all those tables unless you tell me this is really really important (just too busy right now!). It would be good to get a formal +1 from each of the authors to the list indicating we're ok to proceed to request publication just to have that on record. If not giving a +1, of course pls provide a list of required edits! Thanks, Charlie (See attached file: report-v7.zip) Charles Wiecha Multichannel Web Interaction IBM T.J. Watson Research Center P.O. Box 704 Yorktown Heights, N.Y. 10598 Phone: (914) 784-6180, T/L 863-6180, Cell: (914) 232-3483 wiecha@us.ibm.com[attachment "report-v7.zip" deleted by John Boyer/CanWest/IBM]
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