- From: Erik Bruchez <ebruchez@orbeon.com>
- Date: Thu, 15 Feb 2024 19:38:21 -0800
- To: Steven Pemberton <steven.pemberton@cwi.nl>
- Cc: XForms <public-xformsusers@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAAc0PEXGW2B545boZG6sKOhsyV-Eq=pBG8M_5trJ1MMuHSX5iA@mail.gmail.com>
A few comments:
- I never liked calling a "form built with XForms" "an XForm" [1], and this
is the only occurrence of this use in the spec (well, 3 times, but related
to this feature). I would just say "a form", "the form", etc. In fact, you
already use "the embedded form" once later.
- "as described in that section": I suppose that means the `<shared>`
element section. In that case I would make it clearer ("as described in the
shared element section") and link to the section. [2]
- `xforms-binding-error` is not linked, but other events are.
- "In the absence of errors" should be clarified: should it mean that none
of the error events were canceled (which would lead to a "halts processing"
condition), or should it mean that no error events were dispatched? I
assume the latter. I would reword this to say "if no error events were
dispatched" or something like that.
-Erik
[1] Also used as a noun in the 2002 article "What Are XForms".
[2] #The_shared_Element
On Fri, Feb 9, 2024 at 4:39 AM Steven Pemberton <steven.pemberton@cwi.nl>
wrote:
> There's nothing new yet to talk about today, so I propose no call.
>
> However, it would be great if you used the time to quickly check
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> https://www.w3.org/community/xformsusers/wiki/XForms_2.0#The_Control_Element
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> https://www.w3.org/community/xformsusers/wiki/XForms_2.0#The_shared_Element
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> https://www.w3.org/community/xformsusers/wiki/XForms_2.0#The_signal_Element
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> and let me know if anything is unclear, or otherwise signal that you're
> happy with the text.
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> Thanks!
>
> Steven
>
>
Received on Friday, 16 February 2024 03:38:39 UTC