RE: security draft -vo:attached, feedback is needed

All,

First point, not everyone has Word, we should be using the document 
formats that 
we have been using all along for our work. IN our case, we have been using 
XML
and xml-spec DTD. Alternately, we should be using HTML.

I have attached an edited version with some editorial suggestions and some 

comments.



Cheers,

Christopher Ferris
Architect, Emerging e-business Industry Architecture
email: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
phone: +1 508 234 3624

public-wsawg-security-tf-request@w3.org wrote on 04/02/2003 12:50:19 PM:

> I made a few changes on the first page. The draft focused on "audit 
trail" but to me there should 
> be a range of security capabilities in the context of web services 
including authentication, 
> authorization, confidentiality (or should I just say encryption?) and 
auditing.
> 
> Gerald W. Edgar, CISSP <Gerald.Edgar@Boeing.com>
> Architecture support, BCA IS Architecture
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> 
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Abbie Barbir [mailto:abbieb@nortelnetworks.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, April 01, 2003 12:11
> To: Katia Sycara; Francis McCabe
> Cc: Edgar, Gerald; public-wsawg-security-tf@w3.org; Abbie Barbir
> Subject: security draft -vo:attached, feedback is needed

> Hi all,
> 
> enclosed is the v0 version of the security text for the wsa document.
> I have incorporated some of the work from the security proposal that was 
submitted to the list (i 
> forgot from whom)
> 
> please review and provide feedback ASAP
> 
> abbie
> 
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