RE: [Fwd: Edits and notes]

Yes, the specification seems complete and accurate to me, I just made
some style and readability notes.  


Regards, 
Peter 
mobile: +44 7710 302 530 

-----Original Message-----
From: Jacek Kopecky [mailto:jacek.kopecky@deri.org] 
Sent: 19 June 2007 16:01
To: Matthews, Peter
Cc: SAWSDL public list
Subject: Re: [Fwd: Edits and notes]

Dear Peter, thanks for the comments.
If I understand it correctly, all the comments are editorial, not
changing the intent of the specification, is that correct?
Best regards,
Jacek

On Tue, 2007-06-19 at 16:51 +0200, Jacek Kopecky wrote:
> Hi, review comments from Peter Matthews attached.
> Jacek
> 
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> From: Matthews, Peter <Peter.Matthews@ca.com>
> To: Jacek Kopecky <jacek.kopecky@deri.org>
> Subject: Edits and notes
> Date: Tue, 19 Jun 2007 15:48:13 +0100
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Can you circulate this to the appropriate people please.
> 
> 
> Regards,
> Peter
> Peter Matthews
> Research Staff Member
> CA Labs
> tel: +44 1753 242228
> mobile: +44 7710 302 530
> peter.matthews@ca.com
> 

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