- From: Ramkumar Menon <ramkumar.menon@gmail.com>
- Date: Tue, 31 Oct 2006 10:55:49 -0800
- To: public-ws-semann@w3.org
- Message-ID: <22bb8a4e0610311055o1e5b4be0m56dd9d0010716518@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Jacek, I ran a spellcheck and found these grammatical/typo errors in the spec. The errors are enclosed in double quotes. Hope this helps. rgds, Ram 1) Section Name: Abstract Current: This document defines a set of extension attributes for the Web Services Description Language [WSDL 2.0] that "allow to" describe additional semantics of WSDL components. Proposed: This document defines a set of extension attributes for the Web Services Description Language [WSDL 2.0] that allows description of additional semantics of WSDL components. 2) Section 1.4 Current: A loweringSchemaMapping is also attached to the OrderRequest element to point to a mapping, in this case an XML document, "that" shows how the elements within the OrderRequest can be mapped to semantic data in the model. Proposed: A loweringSchemaMapping is also attached to the OrderRequest element to point to a mapping, in this case an XML document, which shows how the elements within the OrderRequest can be mapped to semantic data in the model. 3) Section 2 - Annotation Mechanism Current: This specification does not address the annotation of service implementations. It provides "a" reference mechanisms that can be applied to WSDL type, interface and operation components to point to concepts defined in semantic models. Proposed: This specification does not address the annotation of service implementations. It provides reference mechanisms that can be applied to WSDL type, interface and operation components to point to concepts defined in semantic models. 4) Section 2.1 - SAWSDL Model Reference a) Current: The value of the "a" modelReference attribute is a set of zero or more URIs, separated by whitespaces, that identify concepts in a semantic model. Proposed: The value of the modelReference attribute is a set of zero or more URIs, separated by whitespaces, that identify concepts in a semantic model. b) Current: It is recommended that the URI used for pointing to a semantic concept "resolves" to a document containing its definition. Proposed: It is recommended that the URI used for pointing to a semantic concept resolve to a document containing its definition. 5) Section 3.2 Current: Message parts are referenced from the portType structure in WSDL 1.1 "which" generally corresponds to the WSDL 2.0 interface structure. Proposed: Message parts are referenced from the portType structure in WSDL 1.1 that generally corresponds to the WSDL 2.0 interface structure. 6) Section A.1 Current: This data corresponds to the element "which" has been annotated with the loweringSchemaMapping and can be used by some agent to invoke the purchase order Web service. Proposed: This data corresponds to the element that has been annotated with the loweringSchemaMapping and can be used by some agent to invoke the purchase order Web service. -- Shift to the left, shift to the right! Pop up, push down, byte, byte, byte! -Ramkumar Menon A typical Macroprocessor
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