RE: MOAP is checked

In preparation for the Last Call review approval meeting tomorrow, I suggest some minor edits to the editor's drafts:


1.       All WS-RA specifications

a.       Copyright needs to be updated to 2010.

b.      When Last Call drafts are published, the cross references between the various WS-RA specifications should refer to the respective Last Call draft of the appropriate WS-RA specification.

c.       Health warning

1.       The WS-RA specifications currently use the health warning: "Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to change as it is being currently discussed in the WG". I suggest changing the warning text to: "Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the use of nested policy expressions".

2.       WS-Enumeration [Appendix C] and WS-Eventing [Appendix E]

a.       This contains a health warning: "Note: this is a work in progress and may change before long". I suggest changing the warning text to:  "Note: The WS-RA WG is interested in Last Call feedback on the action tables".

Thanks.

From: public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Doug Davis
Sent: Thursday, March 11, 2010 4:44 PM
To: Ram Jeyaraman
Cc: public-ws-resource-access@w3.org
Subject: RE: MOAP is checked


Done

thanks
-Doug
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03/11/2010 06:19 PM

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RE: MOAP is checked







Hi Doug,

Thanks for the update.

I have one comment. The health warning [1] about the use of nested policy assertions needs to be applied to other policy assertions as well: EventSource, SubscriptionManager, TransferResourceAssertion, TransferResourceFactoryAssertion, DataSource, and FragmentAssertion.

[1]

/mex:MetadataExchange/xs:any
This extensibility point allows for additional WS-MetadataExchange specific metadata to be included within the policy assertion - e.g. WS-MetadataExchange WSDL, or nested policy assertions related to the WS-MetadataExchange message exchanges. Any metadata that appears is scoped to the operations and features of the WS-MetadataExchange specification.
Note: The use of nested policy assertions as shown here is subject to change as it is being currently discussed in the WG.


From: public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org<mailto:public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org> [mailto:public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org]<mailto:[mailto:public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org]> On Behalf Of Doug Davis
Sent: Tuesday, March 09, 2010 9:42 PM
To: public-ws-resource-access@w3.org<mailto:public-ws-resource-access@w3.org>
Subject: MOAP is checked


I've made all of the updates for MOAP.  Please look them over to make sure I didn't miss anything.

thanks
-Doug
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