Re: issue 8273: proposal for WS-Eventing

Gil,

Thanks for the proposal. We agree the general technical content but have
the following editorial changes to

1) avoid introducing new concepts that are already defined in WS-E, such
as "notification stream", "entity", "source owner" and "sink owner" etc.
2) remove some advices that are either well-known or too specific (to be
specific on threats, but general on solutions).
3) Clarify some statements (e.g. per-notification authorization).
4) shorten some sentences without changing their meaning.

The attached word document, which a copy of Ram's version, has our
change marks. 

Thanks,

Wu, Li