RE: issue 8273: proposal for WS-Eventing

In general it is a good direction. I have in mind a few specific comments, mostly editorial, and some description changes. I will put those comments together and provide them in the next few days. Thanks.

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Subject: Re: issue 8273: proposal for WS-Eventing

Attached is version 2 of the WS-Eventing proposal for 8273. I've attached an ODT with changes included and a PDF that shows the changes. I've cleaned up the RFC2119 language to just what I think is necessary, added Katy's suggestion on authenticating Notifications, fixed the spelling error, and made a couple of editorial tweaks.

- gp

On 3/30/2010 2:51 PM, Doug Davis wrote:

Overall looks really good.  just a few comments:
- s/identify/identity/    section 1.2 third line.
- we need to go thru and determine which uses of the RFC2919 keywords was intentional.

thanks
-Doug
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issue 8273: proposal for WS-Eventing







Attached is a proposal to replace Section 7 of WS-Eventing. It's main purpose is to discuss the specific security issues that relate to WS-Eventing and not WS-* security in general.

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