RE: proposal for 6594, 672, 6673

Geoff,
  Chris suggested some wording tweaks - for example, for Put:
This REQUIRED element MUST have as its first child element, an element 
that comprises the representation of the resource that is to be replaced. 
Additional extension elements MAY be included after the element 
representing the resource. 

instead of:
This is a REQUIRED element.  The first child element MUST contain the 
representation to be used for the update.  If extension elements are 
present, they MUST occur after the mandatory first child element.

Thoughts?

thanks
-Doug
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Geoff Bullen <Geoff.Bullen@microsoft.com> 
04/21/2009 01:58 PM

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Doug,
Don?t you think that it is useful to call out specific points of 
extensibility in the spec?
Both Policy and RX use this notation.
--Geoff
 
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Hi Geoff, 
  I'm ok with most of this but I don't think we need the extra stuff about 
the {any} and @{any} - no other WSRA spec has this text for their 
extensibility points and I think our extensibility section already covers 
this.  So, if we remove those edits I'm ok with this. 

thanks
-Doug
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The proposal (
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-resource-access/2009Mar/0088.html
) from IBM is generally good and we suggest the following changes. 
  
Here is a summary of the proposed changes ? change doc is attached. 
  
1)     The proposal for 6730 (
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-resource-access/2009Apr/0024.html
) generally clears up the notion of extensions. I have reworded all 8 
messages to hopefully make more accurate statements about the use of 
extensions. 
2)     Some suggested text to clarify the first paragraph in PutResponse. 
3)     Some suggested text to clarify the first paragraph in Create. 
  
--Geoff 
 
  
  
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[mailto:public-ws-resource-access-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Doug Davis
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Attached is joint proposal for issues 6594, 6672 and 6673 - they all 
seemed to touch on the same concern. 



thanks
-Doug
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