WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies wseventing.html,1.82,1.83 wseventing.xml,1.73,1.74

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv19992

Modified Files:
	wseventing.html wseventing.xml 
Log Message:
fixed some typos found by Li


Index: wseventing.xml
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.73
retrieving revision 1.74
diff -u -d -r1.73 -r1.74
--- wseventing.xml	2 Sep 2009 13:34:57 -0000	1.73
+++ wseventing.xml	2 Sep 2009 14:38:34 -0000	1.74
@@ -1924,8 +1924,8 @@
 (23)       <ow:Location>BRADENTON BEACH</ow:Location>
 (24)       <ow:County>MANATEE</ow:County>
 (25)       <ow:State>FL</ow:State>
-(26)       <ow:Lat>2746</ow:Lat>
-(27)       <ow:Long>8270</ow:Long>
+(26)       <ow:Lat>27.46</ow:Lat>
+(27)       <ow:Long>82.70</ow:Long>
 (28)       <ow:Comments xml:lang="en-US" >
 (29)         WINDS 55 WITH GUSTS TO 65. ROOF TORN OFF BOAT HOUSE. REPORTED
 (30)         BY STORM SPOTTER. (TBW)
@@ -2868,7 +2868,7 @@
     Notifications that can result from a successful Subscribe request. For 
     example, a developer might wish to use WSDL-based tools to generate 
     service stubs capable of marshalling and dispatching Notifications. In 
-    addition to this, the effective use filters (including those in the 
+    addition to this, the effective use of filters (including those in the 
     XPath dialect defined in <specref ref="Subscribe"/> as well as other 
     dialects not defined in this specification) requires some knowledge of 
     the schema of the Events over which the filter will be applied. 
@@ -2923,8 +2923,8 @@
 (17)         &lt;ow:Location>BRADENTON BEACH&lt;/ow:Location>
 (18)         &lt;ow:County>MANATEE&lt;/ow:County>
 (19)         &lt;ow:State>FL&lt;/ow:State>
-(20)         &lt;ow:Lat>2746&lt;/ow:Lat>
-(21)         &lt;ow:Long>8270&lt;/ow:Long>
+(20)         &lt;ow:Lat>27.46&lt;/ow:Lat>
+(21)         &lt;ow:Long>82.70&lt;/ow:Long>
 (22)         &lt;ow:Comments xml:lang="en-US" >
 (23)           WINDS 55 WITH GUSTS TO 65. ROOF TORN OFF BOAT HOUSE. REPORTED
 (24)           BY STORM SPOTTER. (TBW)
@@ -2977,7 +2977,7 @@
        <p>
         This attribute defines the namespace affiliation of the Event Types 
         declared within the EventDescriptions element. Its value MUST be an 
-        absolute IRI <bibref ref="RFC3987"/>. It MAY be dereferencable. 
+        absolute IRI <bibref ref="RFC3987"/>. It MAY be dereferenceable. 
        </p>
       </def>
      </gitem>
@@ -3038,7 +3038,7 @@
     </glist>
     
     <p>
-     The following is an example of a EventDescriptions element that could 
+     The following is an example of an EventDescriptions element that could 
      serve as a description of the Event Type used in 
      <specref ref="Table1"/> and <specref ref="EDExample"/>. 
     </p>
@@ -3135,7 +3135,7 @@
      <div4>
       <head>Binding for Wrapped Notifications</head>
       <p>
-       The information about a Event Type contained in the eventType element 
+       The information about an Event Type contained in the eventType element 
        binds to a Wrapped Notification for that type as follows: 
       </p>
 

Index: wseventing.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2002/ws/ra/edcopies/wseventing.html,v
retrieving revision 1.82
retrieving revision 1.83
diff -u -d -r1.82 -r1.83
--- wseventing.html	2 Sep 2009 13:34:57 -0000	1.82
+++ wseventing.html	2 Sep 2009 14:38:34 -0000	1.83
@@ -1212,8 +1212,8 @@
 (23)       &lt;ow:Location&gt;BRADENTON BEACH&lt;/ow:Location&gt;
 (24)       &lt;ow:County&gt;MANATEE&lt;/ow:County&gt;
 (25)       &lt;ow:State&gt;FL&lt;/ow:State&gt;
-(26)       &lt;ow:Lat&gt;2746&lt;/ow:Lat&gt;
-(27)       &lt;ow:Long&gt;8270&lt;/ow:Long&gt;
+(26)       &lt;ow:Lat&gt;27.46&lt;/ow:Lat&gt;
+(27)       &lt;ow:Long&gt;82.70&lt;/ow:Long&gt;
 (28)       &lt;ow:Comments xml:lang="en-US" &gt;
 (29)         WINDS 55 WITH GUSTS TO 65. ROOF TORN OFF BOAT HOUSE. REPORTED
 (30)         BY STORM SPOTTER. (TBW)
@@ -1580,7 +1580,7 @@
     Notifications that can result from a successful Subscribe request. For 
     example, a developer might wish to use WSDL-based tools to generate 
     service stubs capable of marshalling and dispatching Notifications. In 
-    addition to this, the effective use filters (including those in the 
+    addition to this, the effective use of filters (including those in the 
     XPath dialect defined in <a href="#Subscribe"><b>4.1 Subscribe</b></a> as well as other 
     dialects not defined in this specification) requires some knowledge of 
     the schema of the Events over which the filter will be applied. 
@@ -1626,8 +1626,8 @@
 (17)         &lt;ow:Location&gt;BRADENTON BEACH&lt;/ow:Location&gt;
 (18)         &lt;ow:County&gt;MANATEE&lt;/ow:County&gt;
 (19)         &lt;ow:State&gt;FL&lt;/ow:State&gt;
-(20)         &lt;ow:Lat&gt;2746&lt;/ow:Lat&gt;
-(21)         &lt;ow:Long&gt;8270&lt;/ow:Long&gt;
+(20)         &lt;ow:Lat&gt;27.46&lt;/ow:Lat&gt;
+(21)         &lt;ow:Long&gt;82.70&lt;/ow:Long&gt;
 (22)         &lt;ow:Comments xml:lang="en-US" &gt;
 (23)           WINDS 55 WITH GUSTS TO 65. ROOF TORN OFF BOAT HOUSE. REPORTED
 (24)           BY STORM SPOTTER. (TBW)
@@ -1659,7 +1659,7 @@
        </p></dd><dt class="label"> /wse:EventDescription@targetNamespace </dt><dd><p>
         This attribute defines the namespace affiliation of the Event Types 
         declared within the EventDescriptions element. Its value MUST be an 
-        absolute IRI <a href="#RFC3987">[RFC 3987]</a>. It MAY be dereferencable. 
+        absolute IRI <a href="#RFC3987">[RFC 3987]</a>. It MAY be dereferenceable. 
        </p></dd><dt class="label"> /wse:EventDescriptions/wse:types </dt><dd><p>
         As described earlier, an Event Type is defined by a Global Element 
         Declaration (GED) in XML Schema. This element contains collections 
@@ -1685,7 +1685,7 @@
         used to transmit the Event, serve as a potential aide to 
         identifying the semantics implied by the message. 
        </p></dd></dl><p>
-     The following is an example of a EventDescriptions element that could 
+     The following is an example of an EventDescriptions element that could 
      serve as a description of the Event Type used in 
      <a href="#Table1">Example 2-1</a> and <a href="#EDExample">Example A-1</a>. 
     </p><div class="exampleOuter">
@@ -1747,7 +1747,7 @@
          Event being transmitted.
         </p></li></ul></div><div class="div4">
 <h5><a name="iddiv4_1_2500" id="iddiv4_1_2500"/>A.1.2.2 Binding for Wrapped Notifications</h5><p>
-       The information about a Event Type contained in the eventType element 
+       The information about an Event Type contained in the eventType element 
        binds to a Wrapped Notification for that type as follows: 
       </p><ul><li><p>
          The /soap:Envelope/soap:Body/wse:Notify/@actionURI attribute of the 
@@ -2320,4 +2320,4 @@
        <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6700">6700</a></td></tr><tr><td> 2009/09/02 </td><td> DD </td><td> Added resolution of issue 
        <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6694">6694</a></td></tr><tr><td> 2009/09/02 </td><td> DD </td><td> Added resolution of issue 
        <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6401">6401</a></td></tr><tr><td> 2009/09/02 </td><td> DD </td><td> Added resolution of issue 
-       <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6533">6533</a></td></tr></tbody></table></div></div></body></html>
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+       <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6533">6533</a></td></tr></tbody></table></div></div></body></html>

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