[Bug 8177] New: Transfer: intro is a bit off w.r.t. create

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=8177

           Summary: Transfer: intro is a bit off w.r.t. create
           Product: WS-Resource Access
           Version: FPWD
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Transfer
        AssignedTo: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org
        ReportedBy: dug@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: public-ws-resource-access-notifications@w3.org


Intro says defines two entities, the 2nd one (bullet) says:

Resource factories, which are Web services that can create a new resource from
an XML representation

this is a bit wrong since it implies that the XML on the create is just
the XML representation when it could be an instruction.  It could confuse
people.

Proposal:
change it to:
Resource factories, which are Web services that can create a new resource

basically, just delete "from an XML representation".  This aligns it
with the definition of Resource Factory in section 2.1 too.


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Received on Wednesday, 4 November 2009 16:58:54 UTC