friendly ammendment to 4339

Sergey in response to the bug you filed: 
http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4339
would you consider a friendly ammendment?
 
Target: WS-Policy Primer
 

Sergey's Proposal : Update the last sentence : "Please note that the 
ignorableness is at the discretion of policy consumers therefore ignorable 
assertions may have an
impact on determining compatibility of policies"


Proposed Friendly Ammendment: 
 
"Please note that the impact of the ignorable attribute is at
the discretion of policy consumers (through selection of "lax" or "strict" 
mode)  therefore ignorable assertions may have an effect on determining 
compatibility of policies"