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RE: Guidelines Document

From: Paul Cotton <Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com>
Date: Fri, 20 Oct 2006 15:15:09 -0700
To: "Yalcinalp, Umit" <umit.yalcinalp@sap.com>, Maryann Hondo <mhondo@us.ibm.com>
CC: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <public-ws-policy@w3.org>
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Initial set of editorial comments:

1. Section 5.5 Comparison of Nested and Parametrized Assertions

Change "Parametrized" to "Parameterized" in section title in TOC and later in the document.

2. Section 1. Introduction

" WS-Policy Assertions are xml expressions"

Change "xml" to "XML".

3. Abstract

" Web Services Policy 1.5 - Guidelines for Policy Assertion Authors is a guideline for assertion authors that will work with the Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework and Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment specifications to create domain specific assertions."

Add pointers to references for "Web Service Policy 1.5 - Framework" and "Web Services Policy 1.5. Attachment" since this is the first time they are referenced.

Do this for other documents referenced in the document as well.

4. Section 1. Introduction

"B. XML Namespaces lists all the that are used in this document. (XML elements without a namespace prefix are from the Web Services Policy XML Namespace.)"

Change "all the that" to "all the namespace prefixes that".

5. Section 2.1.1

"An example of a domain specification"

Change "specification" to "specification".

6. Section 2.1.1

" The WS-Security authors have defined their scope as follows"

Change "WS-Security" to "WS-SecurityPolicy".

7. Section 2.1.3

" WS-PolicyFramework and WS-PolicyAssertions specifications."

I think this is trying to refer to the Framework and Attachment specification.  If so then change this to:

"WS-Policy Framework and WS-Policy Attachment specifications."

8. Section 2.1.3

" that can reflect its on the wire message behavior"

Change "its" to "it's".

9. Section 2.1 3

" Whe deploying services with policies it is useful"

Change to:

"When deploying services with policies it is useful".

10. Section 3.1

" A referencing mechanism is very useful in a tooling environment or when creating a domain specific attachment in multiple WSDL files, EPRs, in which the same set of policies are expected to be applied."

"EPRs" should be defined and a reference provided.

Change "in multiple WSDL files, EPRs" to " in multiple WSDL files or EPRs".

11. Section 4

"is marked as optional using the @optionalattribute"

There is a missing space between "@optional" and "attribute".

12. Section 5.1

"New aurthors are encouraged to look at Web Services Reliable Messaging Policy to see an example of a relatively simple domain that has defined 3 assertions."

Change "aurthors" to "authors".

I don't believe this reference actually defines 3 assertions any longer.  Please check.

13. Section 5.2

" it is important to identify whether or not the domain is self containted"

Change "self contaited" to "self-contained".

14. Section 5.2

" will also need to have community supportin implementation"

Fix "supporting".

15. Section 5.3

"thesp:TransportBinding policy assertion"

Missing space after "the".

16. Section 5.3

" The sp:AlgorithmSuite is a nested policy assertion of thesp:TransportBinding policy assertion. Thesp:AlgorithmSuite assertion requires"

Missing space before "sp:" (two occurrences).

17. Section 5.6

" it should be incorporated into the assertion design or in the message iteself"

Change "itself" to "itself".

18 Section 5.7

" in order to engage behaviors must not be forgotton"

Change "forgotton" to "forgotten".

19. Section 5.10

" Howeever, this approach only"

Change "Howeever" to "However".

20. Section 5.11.1

"It also promotes managability"

Change "managability" to "manageability".

21. Section 8

" how a fictitous company might utilize the WS-Policy Framework"

Change "fictitous" to "fictitious".

22. Example 8.1

"<wss:Security sopap:mustUnderstand ="1">"

Change "sopap:" to "soap:".

23. Example 8.2


Fix missing "<".

24.  Section 8

" The sp:TransportBinding element is a policy assertion.The"

Add two spaces at end of sentence and before "The".

25. Section 8

" The first policy is shown in Figure X,"

Fix the bad reference to Figure X.  There are other bad references to Figure Y.


Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
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From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-policy-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Yalcinalp, Umit
Sent: October 19, 2006 7:58 PM
To: public-ws-policy@w3.org
Subject: Guidelines Document

Please find the first version of the guidelines document in [1] and send comments/issues.
Frederick, would you verify the comments you have raised has been adressed to your satisfaction.
[1] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-guidelines.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
Dr. Umit Yalcinalp
NetWeaver Industry Standards
Email: umit.yalcinalp@sap.com Tel: (650) 320-3095
SDN: https://www.sdn.sap.com/irj/sdn/weblogs?blog=/pub/u/36238
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