RE: Action item 125

 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Cotton [mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com] 
> Sent: Friday, Oct 06, 2006 12:15 PM
> To: Felix Sasaki; Yalcinalp, Umit; Maryann Hondo
> Cc: public-ws-policy@w3.org
> Subject: RE: Action item 125
> 
> Thanks for making the name and short name changes.
> 
> I know this is a work in progress but I thought I should note 
> the following comments as early as possible:
> 
> 1. B. XML Namespaces
> 
> I think this section has been copied from another document 
> e.g. Primer.  Many of my editorial comments on the Primer 
> material in the section need to be applied here again.
> 
> I expect that not all of these prefixes are required in the 
> Guidelines document.

You are right, they were copied as a placeholder since we figured out
the division of material that belongs to these sections. 
 
> 
> 2. C. References
> 
> I think this section has been copied from another document 
> e.g. Primer. Many of my editorial comments on the Primer 
> material in the section need to be applied here again.
> 
> Note that NONE of the references listed are actually cited in 
> the text of the document other than in the XML Namespaces 
> section (see above).
> 
> The references (and XML Namespaces) should be stripped back 
> to only those that are actually used.
> 
> There are actually locations in the document that should be 
> hyperlinked to the References section eg references to MTOM.

You are right. Again, this section has not been intended as a "final"
section since it depends on resolving the content division, etc. It will
be cleaned up naturally when the content is solid. 

> 
> /paulc

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> 
> Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
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> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-policy-
> > request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Felix Sasaki
> > Sent: October 6, 2006 12:18 AM
> > To: Paul Cotton
> > Cc: Yalcinalp, Umit; Maryann Hondo; public-ws-policy@w3.org
> > Subject: Re: Action item 125
> >
> >
> > I made the changes you proposed, see
> > 
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2006O
ct/0026.html
> > .
> >
> > The new URI is
> > http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-
> > guidelines.html?rev=1.1&content-type=text/html;%20charset=iso-8859-1
> >
> > tinyurl is http://tinyurl.com/gt2gx
> >
> > Note that the comments from Frederick at
> > 
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/2006Oct/0051.html
> > are now to be read as about the new location.
> >
> > Felix
> >
> >
> > Paul Cotton wrote:
> > >> Web Services Policy 1.5 - Assertion Authors Guideline 
> for WS-Policy
> > >
> > > As I said on the call this week I think a much better title is:
> > >
> > > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Guidelines for Policy 
> Assertion Authors"
> > >
> > > especially since it puts the important word "Guidelines" at the
> > beginning of the "sub-title".
> > >
> > > This fits nicely with the other titles of our documents:
> > >
> > > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework"
> > > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachments"
> > > "Web Services Policy 1.5 - Primer"
> > >
> > > I propose the short name be "ws-policy-guidelines".
> > >
> > > /paulc
> > >
> > >
> > > Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
> > > 17 Eleanor Drive, Ottawa, Ontario K2E 6A3
> > > Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329
> > > mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >> -----Original Message-----
> > >> From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-policy-
> > >> request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Felix Sasaki
> > >> Sent: October 5, 2006 2:30 AM
> > >> To: public-ws-policy@w3.org
> > >> Subject: Action item 125
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> Hi all,
> > >>
> > >> I did my action item 125 "Felix to Input Guidelines doc in CVS".
> > >>
> > >> Please have a look at http://tinyurl.com/gxrh3 or
> > >> 
> http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-a
ssertion-
> > >> guidelines.html?content-type=text/html;charset=utf-8
> > >> .
> > >>
> > >> For the editors: the build.xml is updated respectively.
> > >>
> > >> Felix
> > >
> >
> 
>

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