[Bug 4205] editorial nits

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4205

           Summary: editorial nits
           Product: WS-Policy
           Version: LC
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Framework
        AssignedTo: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
        ReportedBy: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: public-ws-policy-qa@w3.org


These editorial comments are based on the editor's draft:

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
Editors' copy $Date: 2007/01/08 17:20:44 $

Introduction

change:
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives, where a policy alternative  is
a collection of policy assertions. 

to:
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives. A policy alternative  is a
collection of policy assertions. 

change:
A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in a
normal form or in an equivalent compact form. 

to:
A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in its
normal form or in its equivalent compact form. 

(we only have one normal form. a normal form suggests that there are more than
one)

change:
Some policy assertions specify traditional requirements and capabilities that
will ultimately manifest on the wire (e.g., authentication scheme, transport
protocol selection). 

to:
Some policy assertions specify requirements and capabilities that will manifest
themselves in the messages exchanged (e.g., authentication scheme, transport
protocol selection). 

change:
Other policy assertions have no wire manifestation yet are critical to proper
service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS characteristics). 

to:
Other policy assertions have no manifestation in the messages exchanged, yet
are relevant to service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS
characteristics). 

Section 2.1

change:
Information items properties are indicated by the style [infoset property]. 

to:
Information item properties are indicated by the style [infoset property].

Received on Friday, 12 January 2007 17:04:31 UTC