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Implemented the resolution for issue 4857. Editors' action 350. 

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@@ -448,11 +448,12 @@
         two alternatives; one where the assertion A exists with @wsp:Ignorable=true and the 
         second where the assertion A does not exist.</p></div><div class="div2">
 <h3><a name="nested-policy-expressions" id="nested-policy-expressions"></a>2.9 Nested Policy Expressions</h3><p>In the previous sections, we considered two security policy assertions. In this section,
-          let us look at one of the security policy assertions in little more detail.</p><p>As you would expect, securing messages is a complex usage scenario. Company-X uses the
+          let us look at one of the security policy assertions in a little more detail.</p><p>As you would expect, securing messages is a complex usage scenario. Company-X uses the
             <code>sp:TransportBinding</code> policy assertion to indicate the use of transport-level
           security for protecting messages. Just indicating the use of transport-level security for
           protecting messages is not sufficient. To successfully interact with Company-X’s Web
-          services, the developer must know what transport token to use, what secure transport to use, what
+          services, the developer must also know what transport token to use, 
+          what particular secure transport to use, what specific
           algorithm suite to use for performing cryptographic operations, etc. The
             <code>sp:TransportBinding</code> policy assertion can represent these dependent
           behaviors. In this section, let us look at how to capture these dependent behaviors in a
@@ -501,7 +502,8 @@
           and sp:RequireClientCertificate. When the HttpToken is used with an empty nested policy in a
           policy expression by a provider, it will indicate that none of the dependent behaviors namely 
           authentication or client certificate is required. A non-anonymous client who requires authentication 
-          or client certificate will not be able to use this provider solely on the basis of intersection algorithm alone.
+          or client certificate will not be able to use this provider solely on the basis of 
+          policy intersection algorithm alone.
 <div class="exampleOuter">
 <p style="text-align: left" class="exampleHead"><i><span>Example 2-14. </span> Empty Nested Assertion </i></p><div class="exampleInner"><pre>&lt;sp:TransportToken&gt;
     &lt;wsp:Policy&gt;
@@ -804,11 +806,13 @@
           an assertion. In the XML representation, the child elements and attributes of an assertion
           excluding the child elements and attributes from the WS-Policy language XML namespace name, 
           are the assertion parameters. For example @wsp:Optional and @wsp:Ignorable are not assertion parameters.</p><p>We considered nested policy expressions in the context of a security usage scenario. Let
-          us look at its shape in the policy data model. In the normal form, a nested policy is a
-          policy that has at most one policy alternative and is owned by its parent policy
-          assertion. The policy alternative in a nested policy represents a collection of dependent
-          behaviors or requirements or conditions that qualify the behavior of its parent policy
-          assertion.</p><p>A policy-aware client supports a policy assertion if the client engages the behavior or
+          us look at its shape in the policy data model. A nested policy expression is a policy expression that is 
+          a child element of an
+          assertion. In the normal form, a nested policy expression has at most one
+          policy alternative. The policy alternative in a nested policy expression
+          represents a collection of associated or dependent behaviors, requirements or
+          conditions that qualify its parent policy assertion.
+          </p><p>A policy-aware client supports a policy assertion if the client engages the behavior or
           requirement or condition indicated by the assertion. A policy-aware client supports a
           policy alternative if the client engages the behaviors represented by all the assertions
           in the alternative. A policy-aware client supports a policy if the client engages the
@@ -1639,4 +1643,7 @@
               Editors' action <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/331">331</a>.
             </td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20070727</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">ASV</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Fixed a typo in Section <a href="#compatible-policies"><b>3.4 Compatible Policies</b></a>. Editors' action 
               <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/349">349</a>.
+            </td></tr><tr><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">20070727</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">ASV</td><td rowspan="1" colspan="1">Implemented the resolution for issue 
+            <a href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4857">4857</a>. Editors' action 
+              <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/350">350</a>.
             </td></tr></tbody></table><br></div></div></body></html>
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--- ws-policy-primer.xml	27 Jul 2007 20:19:03 -0000	1.66
+++ ws-policy-primer.xml	27 Jul 2007 20:45:59 -0000	1.67
@@ -513,12 +513,13 @@
       <div2 id="nested-policy-expressions">
         <head>Nested Policy Expressions</head>
         <p>In the previous sections, we considered two security policy assertions. In this section,
-          let us look at one of the security policy assertions in little more detail.</p>
+          let us look at one of the security policy assertions in a little more detail.</p>
         <p>As you would expect, securing messages is a complex usage scenario. Company-X uses the
             <code>sp:TransportBinding</code> policy assertion to indicate the use of transport-level
           security for protecting messages. Just indicating the use of transport-level security for
           protecting messages is not sufficient. To successfully interact with Company-X’s Web
-          services, the developer must know what transport token to use, what secure transport to use, what
+          services, the developer must also know what transport token to use, 
+          what particular secure transport to use, what specific
           algorithm suite to use for performing cryptographic operations, etc. The
             <code>sp:TransportBinding</code> policy assertion can represent these dependent
           behaviors. In this section, let us look at how to capture these dependent behaviors in a
@@ -576,7 +577,8 @@
           and sp:RequireClientCertificate. When the HttpToken is used with an empty nested policy in a
           policy expression by a provider, it will indicate that none of the dependent behaviors namely 
           authentication or client certificate is required. A non-anonymous client who requires authentication 
-          or client certificate will not be able to use this provider solely on the basis of intersection algorithm alone.
+          or client certificate will not be able to use this provider solely on the basis of 
+          policy intersection algorithm alone.
 <example>
 <head> Empty Nested Assertion </head>
 <eg>&lt;sp:TransportToken&gt;
@@ -1020,11 +1022,13 @@
           excluding the child elements and attributes from the WS-Policy language XML namespace name, 
           are the assertion parameters. For example @wsp:Optional and @wsp:Ignorable are not assertion parameters.</p>
         <p>We considered nested policy expressions in the context of a security usage scenario. Let
-          us look at its shape in the policy data model. In the normal form, a nested policy is a
-          policy that has at most one policy alternative and is owned by its parent policy
-          assertion. The policy alternative in a nested policy represents a collection of dependent
-          behaviors or requirements or conditions that qualify the behavior of its parent policy
-          assertion.</p>
+          us look at its shape in the policy data model. A nested policy expression is a policy expression that is 
+          a child element of an
+          assertion. In the normal form, a nested policy expression has at most one
+          policy alternative. The policy alternative in a nested policy expression
+          represents a collection of associated or dependent behaviors, requirements or
+          conditions that qualify its parent policy assertion.
+          </p>
         <p>A policy-aware client supports a policy assertion if the client engages the behavior or
           requirement or condition indicated by the assertion. A policy-aware client supports a
           policy alternative if the client engages the behaviors represented by all the assertions
@@ -2536,7 +2540,15 @@
             <td>Fixed a typo in Section <specref ref="compatible-policies"/>. Editors' action 
               <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/349">349</loc>.
             </td>
-          </tr> 
+          </tr>
+          <tr>
+            <td>20070727</td>
+            <td>ASV</td>
+            <td>Implemented the resolution for issue 
+            <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4857">4857</loc>. Editors' action 
+              <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2005/06/tracker/wspolicyeds/actions/350">350</loc>.
+            </td>
+          </tr>  
         </tbody>
       </table>
     </inform-div1>

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