RE: Update for 4041

Hi Umit

 

 I had an explicit comment about the "being truthful" sentence. Please see
my comments here:
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2007Jan/0019.html
<http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2007Jan/0019.html>
and Frederick's follow up at:
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2007Jan/0020.html
<http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy-eds/2007Jan/0020.html>


 

Regards,

Prasad

 

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From: public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Yalcinalp, Umit
Sent: Wednesday, January 10, 2007 11:48 AM
To: WS-Policy Editors W3C
Subject: Update for 4041

 

Frederick,

 

Could you add the following sentence 

 

{It is incumbent of Providers to declare the behaviors that will be engaged
using policies although those behaviors may not exhibit wirelevel
manifestations. The Ignorable marker allows them to be truthful. }

 

after 

 

{Using the Optional attribute would be incorrect in this scenario, since it
would indicate that the behavior would not occur if the alternative without
the assertion were selected.}

 

in the last draft you sent out today. 

 

 

This was captured in the discussion below. I do not want that to be
forgotten because there was a lot of discussion in the wg about this. 

 

Thank you. 

 

--umit

 

 

 

 

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From: public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Yalcinalp, Umit
Sent: Monday, Jan 08, 2007 1:29 PM
To: Maryann Hondo; Frederick Hirsch
Cc: Hirsch Frederick; WS-Policy Editors W3C;
public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org
Subject: RE: 1st draft on primer ignorable

Maryann, 

 

I just reviewed the comments you sent. I believe that they are mostly
editorial in improving the content of the proposal as you have the captured
the hallway conversations. I am fine with the revised text, but I have one
suggestion for the last sentence that says 

 

{It is incumbent on Providers  to declare their policies  and the Ignorable
marker allows them to be truthful.}

 

how about the following instead:

 

{It is incumbent of Providers to declare the behaviors that will be engaged
using policies although those behaviors may not exhibit wirelevel
manifestations. The Ignorable marker allows them to be truthful. 

 

--umit

 

 


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From: public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Maryann Hondo
Sent: Monday, Jan 08, 2007 12:39 PM
To: Frederick Hirsch
Cc: Hirsch Frederick; WS-Policy Editors W3C;
public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org
Subject: Re: 1st draft on primer ignorable


Frederick, 
I have some comments on the text. 
Sorry to have been so late in getting them to you and I'm not sure how 
much they impact other comments you received.  Sorry for the delay. 
Since I wasn't in the hall conversations, I'm not sure if my understanding
matches 
everyone else's and I'm interested in knowing if I've "got it". 
Thanks. 

Maryann 






Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com> 
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01/05/2007 09:54 AM 


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Hirsch Frederick <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com> 


Subject

1st draft on primer ignorable

 


 

 




Attached is 1st draft on adding ignorable to primer. I think we can  
do this simply by adding two new sections as noted.

Please let me know if you think I should add it in today to get it  
into the draft for the F2F, or if you have any other suggestion or  
comment.

Thanks

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia