RE: 1st draft on primer ignorable

Umit,
thanks for the feedback. I'm ok with what you have suggested.

Maryann



"Yalcinalp, Umit" <umit.yalcinalp@sap.com> 
01/08/2007 04:28 PM

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RE: 1st draft on primer ignorable






Maryann, 
 
I just reviewed the comments you sent. I believe that they are mostly 
editorial in improving the content of the proposal as you have the 
captured the hallway conversations. I am fine with the revised text, but I 
have one suggestion for the last sentence that says 
 
{It is incumbent on Providers  to declare their policies  and the 
Ignorable marker allows them to be truthful.}
 
how about the following instead:
 
{It is incumbent of Providers to declare the behaviors that will be 
engaged using policies although those behaviors may not exhibit wirelevel 
manifestations. The Ignorable marker allows them to be truthful. 
 
--umit
 

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Subject: Re: 1st draft on primer ignorable


Frederick, 
I have some comments on the text. 
Sorry to have been so late in getting them to you and I'm not sure how 
much they impact other comments you received.  Sorry for the delay. 
Since I wasn't in the hall conversations, I'm not sure if my understanding 
matches 
everyone else's and I'm interested in knowing if I've "got it". 
Thanks. 

Maryann 




Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com> 
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01/05/2007 09:54 AM 


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1st draft on primer ignorable








Attached is 1st draft on adding ignorable to primer. I think we can 
do this simply by adding two new sections as noted.

Please let me know if you think I should add it in today to get it 
into the draft for the F2F, or if you have any other suggestion or 
comment.

Thanks

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia