RE: 2006/ws/policy ws-policy-framework.xml,1.15,1.16

May I request you to add an entry to the change log?

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Subject: 2006/ws/policy ws-policy-framework.xml,1.15,1.16


Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv8977

Modified Files:
	ws-policy-framework.xml 
Log Message:
Issue 3551 resolution (Misc. (editorial) corrections throughout) incorporated.

Index: ws-policy-framework.xml
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RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -d -r1.15 -r1.16
--- ws-policy-framework.xml	28 Jul 2006 06:34:26 -0000	1.15
+++ ws-policy-framework.xml	3 Aug 2006 21:44:32 -0000	1.16
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@
 <p><termdef id='policy_assertion' term='policy assertion'>A <term>policy assertion</term> represents an individual requirement, capability, or other property of a behavior.</termdef></p>
 <p><termdef id='policy_assertion_type' term='policy assertion type'>A <term>policy assertion type</term> represents a class of <termref def='policy_assertion'>policy assertions</termref> and implies a schema for the assertion and assertion-specific semantics.</termdef></p>
 <p><termdef id='policy_assertion_parameter' term='policy assertion parameter'>A <term>policy assertion parameter</term> qualifies the behavior indicated by a <termref def='policy_assertion'>policy assertion</termref>.</termdef></p>
-<p><termdef id='policy_vocabulary' term='policy vocabulary'>A <term>policy vocabulary</term> of a policy is the set of all <termref def='policy_assertion_type'>policy assertion types</termref> used in a policy.</termdef></p>
+<p><termdef id='policy_vocabulary' term='policy vocabulary'>A <term>policy vocabulary</term> is the set of all <termref def='policy_assertion_type'>policy assertion types</termref> used in a policy.</termdef></p>
 <p><termdef id='policy_expression' term='policy expression'>A <term>policy expression</term> is an XML Infoset representation of a <termref def='policy'>policy</termref>, either in a normal form or in an equivalent compact form. </termdef></p>
 <p><termdef id='policy_subject' term='policy subject'>A <term>policy subject</term> is an entity (e.g., an endpoint, message, resource, interaction) with which a <termref def='policy'>policy</termref> can be associated. </termdef></p>
 <p><termdef id='policy_scope' term='policy scope'>A <term>policy scope</term> is a collection of <termref def='policy_subject'>policy subjects</termref> to which a policy may apply.</termdef></p>
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@
 	  <head>Policy Model</head>
 
 	  <p>This section defines an abstract model for policies and for operations upon policies.</p>
-	  <p>This abstract model is independent of how it is represented as an XML Infoset. </p>
+	    <p>The descriptions below use XML Infoset terminology for convenience of description. However, this abstract model itself is independent of how it is represented as an XML Infoset. </p>
 	  <div2 id="rPolicy_Assertion">
 	    <head>Policy Assertion</head>
 
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@
 	    expressions. Specifically, domain authors are encouraged
 	    to consider when the identity of the root Element
 	    Information Item alone is enough to convey the requirement
-	    (capability).</p>
+	    or capability.</p>
 
 	  </div2>
 	  <div2 id="rPolicy_Alternative">
@@ -492,8 +492,7 @@
 	    the <termref def='policy_vocabulary'>vocabulary of the
 	    policy</termref>; the requester only has to understand the
 	    type of each assertion in the vocabulary of a <termref
-	    def='policy_alternative'>policy
-	    alternative</termref>. This characteristic is crucial to
+	        def='policy_alternative'>policy alternative</termref> the requester supports. This characteristic is crucial to
 	    versioning and incremental deployment of new assertions
 	    because this allows a provider's policy to include new
 	    assertions in new alternatives while allowing requesters
@@ -579,7 +578,7 @@
 (09)   &lt;/wsp:ExactlyOne&gt;
 (10) &lt;/wsp:Policy&gt;</eg>
 
-<p>Lines (02-05) and Lines (06-08) express the two alternatives in the
+<p>Lines (03-05) and Lines (06-08) express the two alternatives in the
 policy. If the first alternative is selected, only the Basic 256 RSA
 15 algorithm suite [<bibref ref="WS-SecurityPolicy"/>] is supported;
 conversely, if the second alternative is selected, only the 3DES RSA

Received on Wednesday, 9 August 2006 05:07:07 UTC