- From: Jonathan Marsh <jmarsh@microsoft.com>
- Date: Thu, 3 Nov 2005 12:43:46 -0800
- To: "Jacek Kopecky" <jacek.kopecky@deri.org>
- Cc: <public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org>
Thanks for your comment. The WS Description Working Group tracked this as a Last Call comment LC349 [1]. We made improvements to the introduction, swapping the first paragraph for the first two sentences of the second paragraph. If we don't hear otherwise within two weeks, we will assume this satisfies your concern. [1] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/desc/5/lc-issues/issues.html#LC349 -----Original Message----- From: public-ws-desc-comments-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-desc-comments-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Jacek Kopecky Sent: Saturday, September 24, 2005 8:55 AM To: public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org Subject: editorial: part 2 section 2 beginning Hi all, just an editorial comment - I find the current beginning of section 2 of part 2 (Predefined Message Exchange Patterns) kinda nasty - introducing the term node before any introductory text that even mentions "message exchange". I think it would help if the introduction of the section was reformulated. Jacek
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