RE: Editorial: schema vs. schema document

Thank you for the comment below, and for your patience with us in
resolving it.  We tracked the comment below as Issue LC66 [1].  The
editors have addressed the editorial matters you highlight below in
their latest drafts [2].

If you agree with our disposition of your comment, we'd like you to
acknowledge it within two weeks; otherwise we will assume you are
satisfied.  The WG plans to enter a second (short) Last Call period in
the near future, and we invite you to review that publication as well.

[1] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/desc/4/lc-issues/issues.html#LC66
[2] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20.html

> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-ws-desc-comments-request@w3.org [mailto:public-ws-desc-
> comments-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Asir Vedamuthu
> Sent: Friday, October 15, 2004 5:51 AM
> To: public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org
> Subject: Editorial: schema vs. schema document
> 
> 
> [On behalf of the XML Schema WG]
> 
> Part 1 says: "Embedding an XML schema uses the existing top-level
> xs:schema
> element information item defined by XML Schema [XML Schema:
> Structures]. It
> may be viewed as simply cutting and pasting an existing, stand-alone
> schema,
> to a location inside the types element information item." -
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-wsdl20-20040803/#embed-xsd
> 
> Should say:
> 
> "Embedding an XML schema uses the existing top-level xs:schema element
> information item defined by XML Schema [XML Schema: Structures]. It
> may be
> viewed as simply cutting and pasting an existing, >schema document<,
> to a
> location inside the types element information item."
> 
> or if you prefer:
> 
> "Embedding an XML schema uses the existing top-level xs:schema element
> information item defined by XML Schema [XML Schema: Structures]. It
> may be
> viewed as simply cutting and pasting >an existing XML representation
> of
> schema information<, to a location inside the types element
> information
> item."
> 
> Note that the terms schema [.1] and schema document [.2] are
> rigorously
> defined in the schema recommendation, and the term "XML
> Representation" is
> widely and uniformly used; we request that these terms be used
> correctly.
> 
> [.1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/#key-schema
> [.2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/#key-schemaDoc
> 
> On behalf of the XML Schema WG,
> 
> Asir S Vedamuthu
> asirv at webmethods dot com
> http://www.webmethods.com/

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