- From: Philippe Le Hegaret <plh@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 18 Jan 2006 12:07:20 -0800
- To: public-ws-addressing-comments@w3.org
- Message-Id: <1137614840.6154.24.camel@localhost>
Core: section "3.4 Formulating a Reply Message" talks about "a reply or fault message related to another message" and about "related message". The current wording is confusing. In all case, the "related message" is in fact a request. Proposed changes: s/related to another message/related to a request message/ s/related message/request message/ s/Example 3-1. Example message/Example 3-1. Example request message/ s/above message/above request message/ SOAP 1.2: section "3.2 Description" "A message MUST NOT contain more than one wsa:To, wsa:ReplyTo, wsa:FaultTo, wsa:Action, or wsa:MessageID header targeted at a recipient. A recipient MUST generate a wsa:InvalidAddressingHeader (see 5.4.1 Invalid Addressing Header) fault if such a message is received." Why requiring an error wsa:InvalidAddressingHeader when you have two action headers, but not requiring an error wsa:MessageAddressingHeaderRequired when no action header is present? Also, how about s/targeted at a recipient/targeted at each recipient/ to make it clear that each recipient can't have more than on for those headers targeted to it. section "5. Faults" "[Subsubcode] A more specific fault subcode that may be used to further qualify the value of the [Subcode] property, use of a specified fault subcode is OPTIONAL." I believe the intent is to say that implementations are not required to send a Subsubcode but, if they do, it must match the specified one. Maybe just changing s/a specified fault subcode/the specified fault subcode/ is enough. Philippe
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