- From: 현욱 <whyun@etri.re.kr>
- Date: Sun, 5 Jan 2014 03:17:12 +0000
- To: Hatano Futomi <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp>
- CC: 김성혜 <shkim@etri.re.kr>, "public-websignage@w3.org" <public-websignage@w3.org>, 허미영 <myhuh@etri.re.kr>, 강신각 <sgkang@etri.re.kr>
2014. 1. 5., 오전 11:51, Futomi Hatano <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp> 작성: > > > * The "Abstract" section > > This section doesn't describe the Emergency Profile, but the Core Profile. > It should be changed to appropriate phrases for the Emergency Profile. > How about this? > > [[ > Digital signage plays a significant role in emergency situations, > such as earthquake, tsunami, fire, etc. > Many lives could be saved with appropriate information > shown on signs in such situations. > > This profile defines requirements for web-based signage > in emergency situations. > Emergency situations can be classified by severity levels. > This profile shows the severity levels, and what and how > signs should show. > Besides, it illustrates how the requirements can be implemented > with web technologies. > ]] > Ooops, there was a mistake on drafting initial skeleton. Yeah, I agree on your proposal. > > To Sung Hei, Wook, > Can I edit the doc on the wiki directly? > I'll replace the phrases in the "Abstract" section, > and add some styles in the doc. > There are many memo-like phrases in the doc for now. > For example, "This section provides ...", "This part can describe ...", > "This part describes...". > I think these phrases should be distinguished from the body text > with some styles, such as font-size, font-style, or color. Sure. It will be very much appreciated if you can help us for making this document. > > > To all, > For now, the doc is just a skeleton. > It's just the beginning. > I hope many members will propose ideas. > +1 It somebody has ideas/opinions for the document, please feel free to propose. > Cheers, > Futomi > Happy new year~! Regards,
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