- From: Wayne Carr <wayne.carr@linux.intel.com>
- Date: Tue, 08 Jul 2014 07:33:47 -0700
- To: "Rottsches, Dominik" <dominik.rottsches@intel.com>, "public-webscreens@w3.org" <public-webscreens@w3.org>
On 2014-07-08 00:28, Rottsches, Dominik wrote: > Thank you, Wayne, > >> On 2014-07-07 12:01, Wayne Carr wrote: >>> I think the new version needs some informative text on ways this could be implemented. Without it, it may not be clear to those unfamiliar with this how it could be implemented. That was in the initial input document and just needs to be updated. The following paragraph could be added to the end of the introduction. > I’ve extended the introduction section of the final report with an edited version of your text. http://webscreens.github.io/presentation-api/#introduction - perhaps you could review those paragraphs. Looks good. Thanks. > > Regards, > > Dominik > >
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