Re: Draft blog post for this week's WPW

Thanks much, Eliot!

I linked to the event, but I feel like I'm a bit over the word count, so
I'll leave it at that.

Took all your other suggestions.

Much appreciated!

J
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From:  Eliot Graff <Eliot.Graff@microsoft.com>
Date:  Wednesday, September 18, 2013 9:57 AM
To:  julee <julee@adobe.com>, WebPlatform Public List
<public-webplatform@w3.org>
Subject:  RE: Draft blog post for this week's WPW

Hi Julee.
 
This looks great, and I am sorry that I wasn¹t at the meetup. Some thoughts:
 
-         Do you want to add any details about the meetup? You mention it,
so maybe a high-level agenda?

-         I would change ³latest² to ³next² in this: ‹ or inventing ‹ the
latest web technology.

-         I think there could be a little more transition between that
sentence and the next paragraph, something like, ³That genius child just may
need a quick reminder about the latest layout properties, which is where our
focus is right now. To help with theŠ²

 
My 2 cents. Take Œem or leave Œem. Either way, looks good to me.
 
Eliot 
 

From: Julee Burdekin [mailto:jburdeki@adobe.com] On Behalf Of Julee
Sent: Wednesday, September 18, 2013 9:23 AM
To: WebPlatform Public List
Subject: Re: Draft blog post for this week's WPW
 

I just changed the permalink to
http://blog.webplatform.org/2013/09/wpw-a-makers-manifesto-revised/.

 

j

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From:  julee <julee@adobe.com>

Date:  Wednesday, September 18, 2013 9:17 AM

To:  WebPlatform Public List <public-webplatform@w3.org>

Subject:  Draft blog post for this week's WPW

Resent-From:  WebPlatform Public List <public-webplatform@w3.org>

Resent-Date:  Wednesday, September 18, 2013 9:18 AM

 

 

Hi, folks:

 

I drafted up a blog post.[1] I think the visibility on the preview should
work for everyone, so if you can't see it, would you kindly let me know?

 

And how about this tweet:

 

"A manifesto, revised: "Build Code -- Document! -- Unite" the #webplatform
<https://twitter.com/search?q=%23webplatform> #WPW
<https://twitter.com/search?q=%23WPW> #CSS
<https://twitter.com/search?q=%23CSS>
http://blog.webplatform.org/2013/09/wpw-a-makers-manifesto/"

 

Thanks much.

 

Julee

 

[1] http://blog.webplatform.org/?p=716&preview=true

 

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