RE: Draft blog post for this week's WPW

Hi Julee.

This looks great, and I am sorry that I wasn't at the meetup. Some thoughts:


-          Do you want to add any details about the meetup? You mention it, so maybe a high-level agenda?

-          I would change "latest" to "next" in this: - or inventing - the latest web technology.

-          I think there could be a little more transition between that sentence and the next paragraph, something like, "That genius child just may need a quick reminder about the latest layout properties, which is where our focus is right now. To help with the..."

My 2 cents. Take 'em or leave 'em. Either way, looks good to me.

Eliot

From: Julee Burdekin [mailto:jburdeki@adobe.com] On Behalf Of Julee
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I just changed the permalink to http://blog.webplatform.org/2013/09/wpw-a-makers-manifesto-revised/.

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Hi, folks:

I drafted up a blog post.[1] I think the visibility on the preview should work for everyone, so if you can't see it, would you kindly let me know?

And how about this tweet:

"A manifesto, revised: "Build Code -- Document! -- Unite" the #webplatform <https://twitter.com/search?q=%23webplatform> #WPW <https://twitter.com/search?q=%23WPW> #CSS <https://twitter.com/search?q=%23CSS> http://blog.webplatform.org/2013/09/wpw-a-makers-manifesto/"

Thanks much.

Julee

[1] http://blog.webplatform.org/?p=716&preview=true

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