- From: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
- Date: Sat, 18 May 2013 14:46:32 -0400
- To: Web Payments <public-webpayments@w3.org>
On 05/18/2013 12:40 AM, Brent Shambaugh wrote: > In the document, I believe that the sentence "The work also deals > with cutting edge technology like Bitcoin, crypto-currencies, ... in > the way of the Web." should be replaced with "The work also deals > with cutting edge technologies like Bitcoin, .... in the way of the > Web." Fixed. > Does this sentence need to be repeated twice? "Note that if we do not > raise enough funding, not all of these projects will be attempted." Moved it into the risks section and expanded upon it. > "To show up higher in Google search rankings" This makes me > uncomfortable because I am aware of efforts to decrease manipulation > of search rankings such as in Google Penguin and before. Re-worded this. > Secondly, I know Google is providing support for GSoC, but could this > statement be unfair to other search providers? I included other search engines in the text now. Thanks for the feedback, Brent - let me know what you think of the updates: http://www.indiegogo.com/projects/code-for-the-web-linked-data-and-web-payments/ -- manu -- Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny) Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc. blog: Meritora - Web payments commercial launch http://blog.meritora.com/launch/
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