Re: [w3c/payment-method-basic-card] Editorial: use Adam's text as intro (#42)

ianbjacobs commented on this pull request.



> +        for merchant sites to store this information long-term to reduce the
+        friction of a user entering a credit card number for every future
+        purchase.
+      </p>
+      <p>
+        The decision whether to retain credit card information for future
+        transactions remains a matter of local policy for web sites; however,
+        the introduction of a programmatic way to retrieve credit card
+        information from a web browser affects some key factors that typically
+        motivate storage of such information.
+      </p>
+      <p>
+        Because the web browser will retain credit card information, and make
+        it available – subject to user approval – whenever a merchant needs it,
+        the friction that merchants seek to avoid is reduced. This frees
+        merchants from the liability considerations of storing information on a

Proposed:

Change:

  "This frees merchants from the liability considerations..."

to:

 "This has the potential to free merchants from some liability considerations...."

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