Re: [Payments Architecture] A vision statement for the web payments architecture work

I would like to offer the follow two adjustments to the "Vision Statement"

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CURRENT TEXT:
*Increases payers' choice of how to make payments.* We seek to enable
people to pay with their preferred payment instruments and payment schemes
and to increase the choice of payment instruments and payment schemes
available to them.

PROPOSED:
*Provides payees and payers unencumbered knowledge and choice in how to
undertake payments.* It is consistent with purpose of the Web to enable
payees to receive payments, and payers to pay, using their preferred
payment instruments and payment schemes. The Web payments architecture must
not restrict these choices.

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CURRENT TEXT:
*Facilitates compliance with regulatory obligations.* The Web is a global
system and thus we do not believe we will conceive of a payments
architecture that satisfies all regulatory obligations in detail. The
group, therefore, envisions a minimal set of “hooks” that enable different
parties to meet the regulatory requirements in their jurisdictions.

PROPOSED:
*Facilitates compliance with legal obligations.* As the Web is a global
system, the Web payments architecture will align to current official
interpretations of the UNCITRAL Model Law on International Credit Transfers
[1] and the UNCITRAL Model Law on Electronic Commerce [2]. It is left to
implementers and users to meet the legal requirements in their
jurisdictions of operation.

[1] UNCITRAL Model Law on International Credit Transfers
http://www.uncitral.org/uncitral/en/uncitral_texts/payments.html
[2] UNCITRAL Model Law on Electronic Commerce
http://www.uncitral.org/uncitral/en/uncitral_texts/electronic_commerce.html


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On Wed, May 20, 2015 at 11:45 AM, Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org> wrote:

>
> > On May 20, 2015, at 10:39 AM, Katie Haritos-Shea GMAIL <
> ryladog@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > I propose to add privacy in the sentence:
> > Supports a wide spectrum of security and privacy needs to meet industry
> > and regulatory expectations.
> >
> > I would also add that the word accessibility be added to the sentence as
> well, as it also falls under industry and regulatory expectations.
>
> I prefer that we focus in that bullet on Security. Accessibility is
> covered earlier in the doc.
> Ian
>
> >
> >
> >
> > * katie *
> >
> > Katie Haritos-Shea
> > Senior Accessibility SME (WCAG/Section 508/ADA/AODA)
> >
> > Cell: 703-371-5545 | ryladog@gmail.com | Oakton, VA | LinkedIn Profile
> | Office: 703-371-5545
> >
> > From: Adrian Hope-Bailie [mailto:adrian@hopebailie.com]
> > Sent: Wednesday, May 20, 2015 10:07 AM
> > To: Kepeng Li
> > Cc: David Ezell; Ian Jacobs; Manu Sporny; Web Payments IG; Web Payments
> CG
> > Subject: Re: [Payments Architecture] A vision statement for the web
> payments architecture work
> >
> > All suggestions incorporated.
> >
> > On 20 May 2015 at 08:48, Kepeng Li <kepeng.lkp@alibaba-inc.com> wrote:
> >> > Supports a wide spectrum of security needs to meet industry and
> >> >regulatory expectations.
> >>
> >>
> >> I propose to add privacy in the sentence:
> >> Supports a wide spectrum of security and privacy needs to meet industry
> >> and regulatory expectations.
> >>
> >>
> >> In the use case document, we have already mentioned some privacy
> >> requirements, and we have also talked about minimizing the exposure of
> >> sensitive information in the subsequent bullets.
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Kind Regards
> >>
> >> Kepeng Li
> >> Alibaba Group
> >>
> >>
> >> 在 20/5/15 8:25 am， "David Ezell" <David_E3@VERIFONE.com> 写入:
> >>
> >> >That's good.
> >> >
> >> >-----Original Message-----
> >> >From: Ian Jacobs [mailto:ij@w3.org]
> >> >Sent: Tuesday, May 19, 2015 8:07 PM
> >> >To: David Ezell
> >> >Cc: Manu Sporny; Web Payments IG; Web Payments CG
> >> >Subject: Re: [Payments Architecture] A vision statement for the web
> >> >payments architecture work
> >> >
> >> >* PGP Signed by an unknown key
> >> >
> >> >
> >> >> On May 19, 2015, at 3:10 PM, David Ezell <David_E3@VERIFONE.com>
> wrote:
> >> >>
> >> >> Hi Folks:
> >> >>
> >> >> Ian wrote:
> >> >>> * Supports a wide spectrum of security needs to meet industry and
> >> >>>regulatory expectations.
> >> >>>   To meet regulatory requirements and give people enough confidence
> to
> >> >>>use the Web for
> >> >>>   payments, the architecture must support a wide spectrum of
> security
> >> >>>requirements and
> >> >>>   solutions. This includes the ability to encrypt strongly both
> >> >>>sensitive information and the
> >> >>>   channels used to exchange the information, as well as supporting
> an
> >> >>>evolving variety of
> >> >>>   authentication techniques (multifactor, biometric, etc.). Trust in
> >> >>>the Web of payments
> >> >>>   is critical to its success.
> >> >>
> >> >> Yes, all good.  Gives a list of things that will be included.
> Somehow
> >> >>(and there's a lot there already) I think it should say what we will
> >> >>attempt >not< to require.
> >> >> Perhaps a second bullet for clarity:
> >> >> "* Minimizes (eliminates?) reliance on Personally Identifiable
> >> >>Information (PII) to fulfill any requirements.”
> >> >
> >> >How about:
> >> >
> >> >* Supports a wide spectrum of security needs to meet industry and
> >> >regulatory expectations.
> >> >   Trust in the Web of payments is critical to its success.
> >> >   To meet regulatory requirements and give people confidence to use
> the
> >> >Web for
> >> >   payments, the architecture must support a wide spectrum of security
> >> >requirements and
> >> >   solutions. This includes minimizing what sensitive information is
> >> >shared as well as the ability
> >> >   to encrypt that information (both in transit and when stored). The
> >> >architecture will also need
> >> >   to support an evolving variety of authentication techniques
> >> >(multifactor, biometric, etc.).
> >> >
> >> >Ian
> >> >
> >> >--
> >> >Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org>      http://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs
> >> >Tel:                       +1 718 260 9447
> >> >
> >> >
> >> >
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