Re: Request for Review of WebID specs before publishing

https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/WebID/raw-file/tip/spec/tls-respec.html#the-webid-protocol

1.2 Terminology

"Alice is an agent who owns a Server which runs a Service which Bob 
wishes to Access."  "access" doesn't have to be capitalized.  I 
understand in the cases where words like "Service" are capitalized since 
they have been explicitly defined in the document.  But "access" has no 
such definition.  The capitalization schema is inconsistent.

Similarly, with "A TLS Service is a transport level service listening on 
theService 
<https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/WebID/raw-file/tip/spec/tls-respec.html#dfn-service>port. 
It secures the transport layer before passing messages to the 
Application layerService 
<https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/WebID/raw-file/tip/spec/tls-respec.html#dfn-service>itself." 
lowercase on "application".

"Server Credentials and..." to "Server credentials and..."
"satisfy the Access Control Rules." to "satisfy the access control rules"

perhaps I am missing the reasoning in these cases?


      2.1The certificate

Here certificate can be captialized ->  2.1 The Certificate :-)

     - Erich


On 09/05/13 9:52 AM, Henry Story wrote:
> Dear WebID Community Group,
>
>    we now have three specs up on github here
>
>     https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/WebID/raw-file/tip/spec/index.html
>
> All editors think that it is time to publish a new version
> on the W3C WebID Incubator space, to finalise the distinction
> between WebID, WebID-TLS, and the cert ontology.
>
> So we would like to be able to publish the specs above
> at the following location, by Friday 20 September 2013
>
>    http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/webid/spec/
>
> We would be very happy to receive feedback from
> the community before doing so. If you can spot
> any errors or improvements please let us know,
> we'll do our best to get them in before publication.
>
>     Thanks,
>
> 		Henry Story
>
>
> Social Web Architect
> http://bblfish.net/
>
>