Re: WebCGM 2.0 REC cover page.

Lofton Henderson wrote:

> Mostly good, but I thought it better to say, s/boilerplate/formatting/.  
> So I made that change, and these as well:

OK
> 
> 2.) I think the bare OASIS logo works better here, rather than the wide 
> advertising banner version.  In fact, better looking yet would be 
> something like this,
> http://www.cgmopen.org/schema/webcgm/ ,

Right I was looking for this bare logo but could not find it.

> but with the order reversed so that W3C is first.  (But this formatting 
> deviates more from W3C conventions.)

OK
> 
> 3.) I changed the ZIP file name to WebCGM20-20070115.zip, and fixed the 
> link to it on the cover page.

Good catch.
> 
> 
>> Let me know if there is more to say or correct before I send this to 
>> the Comm Team and Janet.
> 
> So for my understanding ... right now, these cover page things -- 
> especially the OASIS logo, etc -- are yet to be discussed and approved 
> with Comm & Janet?

Yes Janet was not 100% sure about it. I should be discussed and approved
BY Comm & Ian.
> 
> FWIW, I am going to wait until you have settled all those questions, 
> before discussing similar ones with OASIS.

OK.
> 
> 
>> If you need to edit the spec you may do that in place (I think we have 
>> 2 edits pending) + the Changes since PR in Appendix D1.
> 
> I have not done these edits yet in the W3C version, but will do them soon.

No big hurry.


Thanks for your review.
I will submit this page to Comm & Ian, and will come back to you when I 
et some feedback.
> 
> Thanks,
> -Lofton.
> 
>

Received on Wednesday, 22 November 2006 09:29:53 UTC