RE: CfC: publish Proposed Recommendation of Progress Events; deadline November 25

> From: Takeshi Yoshino [mailto:tyoshino@google.com] 
> Sent: Tuesday, November 19, 2013 1:48 PM
>
> two minor comments
> - add semicolons to lines of the example code in the introduction section?
This might not be an issue but I agree to add them.

> - 2nd paragraph in the conformance section, quote "must"?
It looks better.

I'll put together a PR-ready draft incorporating the above comments. Also,
please note that there was a minor change [1] in the ED [2], a year ago,
which I'll use as a base document for the PR-ready draft.

Thanks!

[1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/progress/rev/964030fa5727
[2] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/progress/raw-file/tip/Overview.html


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Jungkee Song
Samsung Electronics

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