[Bug 16287] New: editorial - ambiguous antecedent of 'their values'


           Summary: editorial - ambiguous antecedent of 'their values'
           Product: WebAppsWG
           Version: unspecified
          Platform: All
               URL: http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/xhr/raw-file/8d4e9ccfdbd4/Overvi
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: XHR
        AssignedTo: annevk@opera.com
        ReportedBy: glenn@skynav.com
         QAContact: public-webapps-bugzilla@w3.org
                CC: mike@w3.org, public-webapps@w3.org

In the second paragraph of section 4.1, the pronoun 'their' in "their values"
is ambiguous. Presumably their refers to the associated origin and base URL
mentioned in the previous paragraph, but it also may refer to "each
XMLHttpRequest object". I suggest you combine the first and second paragraphs,
and perhaps substitute "value of origin and base URL" for "their values".

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Received on Friday, 9 March 2012 19:24:24 UTC