Re: [whatwg/fetch] Editorial: account for HTTP updates (PR #1587)

@domenic approved this pull request.

LGTM with nits

> @@ -564,6 +559,10 @@ consistency.
 
 <h4 id=terminology-headers>Headers</h4>
 
+<p class=note>HTTP generally refers to headers as ‘fields’ or ‘header fields’. The web platform uses
+the more colloquial term ‘header’. [[HTTP]]

The fancy quotes here are a bit strange; non-fancy double-quotes would be more usual.

>  
 <p>A <dfn id=concept-stale-while-revalidate-response>stale-while-revalidate response</dfn> is a
-<a for=/>response</a> that is not a <a>fresh response</a> and whose
-<a href=https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7234#section-4.2.3>current age</a> is within the
-<a href=https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc5861#section-3>stale-while-revalidate lifetime</a>.
+<a for=/>response</a> that is not a <a>fresh response</a> and whose <a>current age</a> is within the
+<a href=https://httpwg.org/specs/rfc5861.html#rfc.section.3>stale-while-revalidate lifetime</a>.

Add to the links block?

>        [[!COOKIES]]), then:
 
       <ol>
        <li><p>Let <var>cookies</var> be the result of running the "cookie-string" algorithm (see
-       <a href=https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc6265#section-5.4>section 5.4</a> of
+       <a href=https://httpwg.org/specs/rfc6265.html#cookie>section 5.4</a> of

Maybe use a section name instead of number while you're here. Or change this to the cross-reference style below you used for chapters?

Same for other cookie spec updates as below.

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