Re: [whatwg/fetch] Acknowledge interaction with draft-ietf-dnsop-svcb-https scheme redirect (#1325) from Mike West on 2022-04-05 (public-webapps-github@w3.org from April 2022)

From: Mike West <notifications@github.com>
Date: Tue, 05 Apr 2022 09:16:05 -0700
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@mikewest approved this pull request.

Apologies for the delay. I've read through the diff, and I'm happy with where this ended up. I have only one dumb nit. Otherwise LGTM.

> + <p>The order of the <a for=/>IP addresses</a> <a>resolve an origin</a> can return return can differ
  between invocations.

Nit: I stumbled over this while reading. Since you're here, would you mind making a small change along the lines of the following? (The double "return" should be fixed regardless.)

```suggestion
 <p>The order of the <a for=/>IP addresses</a> that the <a>resolve an origin</a> algorithm can return 
can differ between invocations.
```

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