Re: [whatwg/fetch] Integrate Client-Hints with Fetch (#258)

> The URL fragments seem incorrect. You hyphenate the section titles but the fragment is actually shorter.

Oi.. Not sure what happened there. Pushed a fix.

> Those sections, in your draft, should probably say they define the header field value. A header field consists of a name and a value.

Sounds reasonable, I'll take that as a separate AI.

> Rather than referencing them as "definition" it would be clearer to use a suitable <a><code>Width</code> value</a> or some such.

Replaced "definition" with "suitable value", which links to the definition. Does that look better? I didn't want to repeat the header name.

Re, xref: https://github.com/whatwg/xref/pull/10

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Do you want me to squash the changes? 

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