- From: Anne van Kesteren <annevk@opera.com>
- Date: Thu, 28 Jun 2007 16:50:59 +0200
- To: "denis sureau" <scriptet@gmail.com>, public-webapi@w3.org
On Thu, 28 Jun 2007 12:36:01 +0200, denis sureau <scriptet@gmail.com> wrote: > [...] Fixed the typos. > Not clear what you mean by bubbling: > > ...is dispatched on it during the bubbling phase That term is defined in DOM Level 3 Events. > Should not contain a "format" but a string instead: > > If stored url just contains the "user" format let stored user be the > user part. I don't understand this comment. > Some commas may improve the readability: > > If the user argument was not omitted and its syntax does not match that > specified by the relevant authentication scheme raise a SYNTAX_ERR > exception and terminate these steps. Done. > By the "user" argument? > > This step overrides any user that may have been set by the url > argument. No, url argument is correct. > "Method" word missing: > > Note that this algorithm might get aborted if the open() or abort() is > invoked. Added > Wording: > > If no Content-Type header is in the list of request headers append > it to the list of request headers Made more explicit. > Comma required: > > If the data argument has been omitted or is null no entity body is > used in the request. Added > "Error" word missing, and comma also: > > In case of DNS errors or other type of networks run the following set > of steps. Fixed both. > I don't know if its regarded as a contribution but I have an advice. The > removal of descriptions of the methods, replaced by just an algorithm is > not an improvement for some users, as students for example, that may use > the > spec as a reference... For those it's probably better if there's a tutorial from which they can copy & paste. The specification is primarily aimed at implementors. -- Anne van Kesteren <http://annevankesteren.nl/> <http://www.opera.com/>
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