- From: denis sureau <scriptet@gmail.com>
- Date: Thu, 28 Jun 2007 12:36:01 +0200
- To: public-webapi@w3.org
- Message-ID: <eb81e42b0706280336t3de0d7cejd550b0c1e154797e@mail.gmail.com>
I have just achieved the translation in french. I dont know if this is regarded as a contribution, but I have noticed some inacuracies... Users agents become a single one: Conforming user agents must support some version of DOM Events and DOM Core, because this specification uses some of the features defined in those specifications. [DOM3Events] [DOM3Core] (...) It must also support some version of... And also: Conforming user agents must support some version of the HTTP protocol. The user agent should support... Which value? The XML response entity body is either a Document representing the response entity body or null and is determined by running the following algorithm (the return value is its value): One or several specs? ...set forth in the XML specification (...) Parse the response entity body following the rules from the XML specifications Not clear what you mean by bubbling: ...is dispatched on it during the bubbling phase Should not contain a "format" but a string instead: If stored url just contains the "user" format let stored user be the user part. Some commas may improve the readability: If the user argument was not omitted and its syntax does not match that specified by the relevant authentication scheme raise a SYNTAX_ERR exception and terminate these steps. By the "user" argument? This step overrides any user that may have been set by the url argument. "Method" word missing: Note that this algorithm might get aborted if the open() or abort() is invoked. Wording: If no Content-Type header is in the list of request headers append it to the list of request headers Comma required: If the data argument has been omitted or is null no entity body is used in the request. "Error" word missing, and comma also: In case of DNS errors or other type of networks run the following set of steps. I don't know if its regarded as a contribution but I have an advice. The removal of descriptions of the methods, replaced by just an algorithm is not an improvement for some users, as students for example, that may use the spec as a reference... Denis Sureau: http://www.xul.fr
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