questions on the April 11th draft

Dear editors,

In section 2.1, the following text seems to have a problem:
/A Service is a web page which can handle an Intent, possibly returning 
a piece of data to the calling Client page. Again, the User Agent may 
have ways to deliver Intents to Services which are not web pages.
/The first sentence says "a service is a web page..."
The second sentence says "services which are not web pages".
Seems like a contradiction to me.
I suspect the first sentence should be "inverted": a web page which can 
handle an intent is a service
Is that right ?

In section 3.2 " The Intent object models a particular task which can be 
requested by handled by client pages."
Would that be " The Intent object models a particular task which can be 
requested to be handled by client pages." ?

Language in the last example and elsewhere makes me wonder about the 
"loading status" of page A defining an intent B.
Page A is loaded.
Then intent B is registered.
Then page A is unloaded.
What is the status of intent B ?
If intent B is still "on", is page A reloaded upon a successful request 
to intent B ?

Thanks
JC

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