FW: TOP TO BOTTOM REVIEW

Forwarding Gregg’s overall WCAG2ICT document review so others can see it. The content in this document was captured prior to the updates to the editor’s notes and other changes that were incorporated this week. I’ll be going through this document today to see if there’s anything substantive for us to discuss on Thursday 23 May. Purely editorial changes I will put into a pull request immediately.

Best regards,

Mary Jo Mueller
IBM Accessibility Standards Program Manager


From: Mary Jo Mueller <maryjom@us.ibm.com>
Date: Friday, May 17, 2024 at 9:42 AM
To: Day, Phil <Phil.Day@ncratleos.com>, Christopher Loiselle <chris.loiselle@oracle.com>
Subject: FW: [EXTERNAL] TOP TO BOTTOM REVIEW
FYI, received this overall document review from Gregg early this morning. Going to have to see what, if any, of his proposed edits are necessary to include. He did capture the document at an earlier point in time (not sure when) before all of the PRs yesterday and the last few days (his document has old editor’s notes).

Best regards,

Mary Jo Mueller
IBM Accessibility Standards Program Manager


From: Gregg Vanderheiden RTF <gregg@raisingthefloor.org>
Date: Friday, May 17, 2024 at 4:07 AM
To: Mary Jo Mueller <maryjom@us.ibm.com>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] TOP TO BOTTOM REVIEW
Hi Mary Jo I did a first to last word review of the WCAG2ICT my comments are in this document — as tracked edits. Some are just typos and such and you can just pull and make those. Others I would like to submit — and want to talk to you about
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Hi Mary Jo

I  did a first to last word review of the WCAG2ICT

my comments are in this document — as tracked edits.

Some are just typos and such and you can just pull and make those.

Others I would like to submit — and want to talk to you about the best way to do them

  *   I  THINK most or all are non-controversial  — but need to be vetted anyway.

There are not many.  I was very happy to see that.

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My cellphone is 608 692-5281

Gregg