Re: Action Item #19 Work with Al to come up with a couple of examples for 4.1.2

Gregg,

Thanks for catching that, I'm fine with "to be".


Peter

On 6/28/2012 6:47 AM, Gregg Vanderheiden wrote:
> this looks good except for the word SHOULD which I didn’t notice 
> before -- but shouldn’t be here.   We are avoiding formal standard 
> terms  MUST/SHALL SHOULD  MAY
>
> perhaps change it to  "to be"
>
>
> Most platform accessibility services go beyond programmatic exposure 
> of name and role, and programmatic setting of states, properties and 
> values (and notification of same), and specify additional information 
> *to be *exposed and/or set */(for example, obtaining a list of the 
> available actions for a given user interface component, and 
> programmatically executing one of the listed actions)./*
>
> RE the example at the end.  -- this seems to be good info but the 
> wrong form.   The sentence is about "information to be exposed"  but 
> the example is not information but a n example of a use of the 
> information (I think).   maybe it should be   "  e.g a list
>
> */(for example a list of the available actions for a given user 
> interface component, and a means to programmatically execute one of 
> the listed actions)./*
>
> that would give us
>
> *
> *
> *Most platform accessibility services go beyond programmatic exposure 
> of name and role, and programmatic setting of states, properties and 
> values (and notification of same), and specify additional 
> informationto be exposed and/or set (for example a list of the 
> available actions for a given user interface component, and a means to 
> programmatically execute one of the listed actions).*
>
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> On Jun 28, 2012, at 6:44 AM, Hoffman, Allen wrote:
>
> I’m fine with Peter’s last writing here.
> *From:*Peter Korn [mailto:peter.korn@oracle.com]
> *Sent:*Wednesday, June 27, 2012 7:27 PM
> *To:*Crowell, Pierce
> *Cc:*'public-wcag2ict-tf@w3.org <mailto:public-wcag2ict-tf@w3.org>'
> *Subject:*Re: Action Item #19 Work with Al to come up with a couple of 
> examples for 4.1.2
> Pierce,
>
> For me the parenthetical remark "(and notification of same)" are 
> "event notifications", so I think mentioning such notification a 
> second time is redundant.  But there are two aspects of actions that 
> might be called out separately, so as to have two examples: 
> enumerating them and programmatically executing them.
>
> Here's a proposed edit, with the new example text in the parenthetical 
> example at the end, in*/boldface italics/*:\
> Most platform accessibility services go beyond programmatic exposure 
> of name and role, and programmatic setting of states, properties and 
> values (and notification of same), and specify additional information 
> that could or should be exposed and/or set*/(for example, obtaining a 
> list of the available actions for a given user interface component, 
> and programmatically executing one of the listed actions)/*.
>
> Regards,
>
> Peter
>
> On 6/27/2012 2:05 PM, Crowell, Pierce wrote:
> Action Item #19 Work with Al to come up with a couple of examples for 
> 4.1.2
> We propose the last sentence read:
> Most platform accessibility services go beyond programmatic exposure 
> of name and role, and programmatic setting of states, properties and 
> values (and notification of same), and specify additional information 
> that could or should be exposed and/or set (for example, event 
> notifications and lists of available actions).
> Pierce
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