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Fwd: Minor edits/typos in WCAG-EM

From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 09 Dec 2013 13:25:45 +0100
Message-ID: <52A5B6C9.4010404@w3.org>
To: public-wcag-em-comments@w3.org
CC: Bim Egan <bim@w3.org>
Thanks Bim. Indeed it is better to sent typos separately. I'm forwarding 
them to the comments list.

Best,
   Shadi


-------- Original Message --------
Subject: Minor edits/typos in WCAG-EM
Resent-Date: Mon, 09 Dec 2013 11:16:01 +0000
Resent-From: public-wai-evaltf@w3.org
Date: Mon, 9 Dec 2013 11:15:32 -0000
From: Bim Egan <bim@w3.org>
To: <public-wai-evaltf@w3.org>

I commented on wording in the web form but thought consolidation would 
be easier if typos were separate.


** Evaluation Procedure
* Under Terms and Definitions:
- Web page states
ancilliary should be ancillary

* Step 1.e: Define Additional Evaluation Requirements (Optional):
- "For review" panel
Capitalization of september ... twice

- 1st paragraph after "For Review" panel:
evalaute  should be evaluate.

- Last  paragraph after "For Review" panel: (second sentence)
needed should be needs.

* Step 2.a: Identify Common Web Pages of the Website
- First paragraph
identfy  should be identify.

* Step 3: Select a Representative Sample
- First bullet point after second paragraph
typcially  should be typically.

- Sub-bullet  "Development tools being used " under penultimate bullet point
after second paragraph
constistent  should be consistent .

* Step 3.c: Include Exemplar Instances of Web Pages
- First paragraph
distinctinstance ... needs a space

* Step 3.e: Include a Randomly Selected Sample
- First paragraph, second sentence
approachs should be approaches.

- Last bullet point after third paragraph
methods should be methods

* Step 4.e: Compare Structured and Random Samples
- First paragraph
occurences  should be occurrences

* Step 5.a: Document the Outcomes of Each Step
- 2nd Sub-bullet under bullet for ".	Sample Audited "
procceses  should be processes

* Step 5.b: Record the Evaluation Specifics (Optional)
- First paragraph (below Reminder)
satisifed should be  satisfied
validty  should be validity

* Step 5.d: Provide a Performance Score (Optional)
- First paragraph  under "Per Web Page"
occassional  should be occasional
consistenly  should be consistently

- First paragraph under "Per instance"
occassional  should be occasional


Please also note that all appendices are at heading level 3, same as each of
the procedures above, which makes them difficult to locate by heading
navigation.  ... Could there be a containing H2 for Appendices? Or change
the heading level for each appendix.

Cheers,

Bim
Received on Monday, 9 December 2013 12:26:18 UTC

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