- From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 03:08:23 -0000
- To: public-wai-ert@w3.org
Hi,
This is a comment about
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-HTTP-in-RDF-20061220/
# Introduction
In introduction, Avoid as much as possible form of the type "This document presents", talk about the subject right away. For example,
"HTTP Vocabulary in RDF" is a representation of …
# typos
s/not inteded/not intended/
# references
Do not use references as direct names for the resources, you are pointing to. Instead of
refer to [RDF] or [RDF-PRIMER] for this purpose.
prefer
refer to Resource Description Framework (RDF): Concepts and Abstract Syntax [RDF] or RDF Primer [RDF-PRIMER] for this purpose.
You can even put a direct link in the form of
<cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf-concepts/">Resource Description Framework (RDF): Concepts and Abstract Syntax</a></cite> [<a href="#ref-rdf">RDF</a>]
That way, you maximize the usability of the document.
# Table of contents
The table of contents under 3. is not right
3 Header Extensions (RFC 4229)
* 2.1. Request Extensions
* 2.2. Response Extensions
* 2.3. Unbound Extensions
Title: "HTTP Vocabulary in RDF"
URL: http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-HTTP-in-RDF-20061220/
Date: 2007-01-17
Status: 1st WD
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