RE: WSTF - rewrite blurb as bullets

>> I think a good intro sentence before the bullets would help it kind
of flow a little bit. Just the "WAI develops..." Kind of feels too
listish. <<

I'm not sure about it needing a sentence introduction. Think about it
totally differently than what we had before - more succinct tag-line-ish
that paragraph explanantion.

Is this correct:
- purpose: communicate a few important points that we think need to be
addressed on the home page - goal: to take up as little space on the
home page as feasible
- goal: be easy to skim
- goal: be easy to find, yet easy to mask out for repeat visitors
?

We talked yesterday about not wanting it to be the primary focus.
Imagine it somehow off to the side, or maybe like a banner ad at the
top. More market-y design, and less like an About WAI introduction...

Maybe the fewer words and less sentence-y the better?

Reactions?

~ Shawn


> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:public-wai-eo-site-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Shawn 
> Lawton Henry
> Sent: Monday, June 28, 2004 8:08 PM
> To: public-wai-eo-site@w3.org
> Subject: WSTF - rewrite blurb as bullets
> 
> 
> 
> I was inspired by Justin's email and discussion in tonight's 
> meeting. Below is an idea. I'm not sure if I like it or not. 
> Please reply on list
> - good or bad!
> 
> WAI develops...
> - guidelines widely regarded as the international standards 
> for Web accessibility
> - support materials to help understand and implement Web accessibility
> - resources through international collaboration
> 
> WAI welcomes...
> - participation from individuals and organizations around the world
> - volunteers to review, implement, and promote guidelines
> - dedicated participants in interest groups and working groups
>

Received on Tuesday, 29 June 2004 09:36:39 UTC