- From: Carol at Kognitive.com <carol@kognitive.com>
- Date: Mon, 28 Jun 2004 22:11:26 -0500
- To: <public-wai-eo-site@w3.org>
Justin said: > I think this is a step in the right direction. I think a good intro sentence before the bullets would help it kind of >flow a little bit. Just the "WAI develops..." Kind of feels too listish. > > I think it's a TON more scannable. I can actually read it with out having to think a lot. I agree - intro sentence is a tuffy though. Here's a couple of fun ones to get us rolling: 1. There's a lot of Web out there, and WAI is working to make it all accessible. 2. The international mix that makes up WAI is focused on two sets of activities: 3. WAI is made up of a diverse group of people who care about making the web accessible to all. 4. WAI is leading the charge to make the web accessible to all people This one I changed Shawn's wording slightly: 5. WAI is an international organization devoted to making the Web accessible by: Developing... > - guidelines widely regarded as the international standards for Web > accessibility > - support materials to help understand and implement Web accessibility > - resources through international collaboration > Welcoming... > - participation from individuals and organizations around the world > - volunteers to review, implement, and promote guidelines > - dedicated participants in interest groups and working groups
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