- From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 12:06:28 +0200
- To: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Cc: public-wai-eo-badtf@w3.org
Hello Shadi and all, Following Shadi's requirement, please find below some comments after I have reviewed the "after" version of the Citylights site. I hope this is useful. I am happy to help further if it is still needed. Best regards Sylvie --------- Comments: In general: 1. It is difficult to take apart what is WAI information, and what is a feature that has been implemented by the Web site designer to facilitate the accessibility of the site. Example: "Screenreader Tips and other Accessibility Features". Is it a note from the task force or a note from the "citylights" Website designers. When you click on this link, you come to a page error. Just after the link, there is an information called (press enter), what is it intended for? 2. Selecting another page through the "quick menu" does not seem to work. When you select "facts" in the "quick menu" and click "go", an error page is displayed. The quick menu is also not always the same. On the Home page, you have the choice between the 4 pages. The choice for home has additional information telling the user that Home is the current page. This informatin is not available on the quick menu of the other pages. In the quick menu of the page "news" the menu item "news" has disappeared from the quick menu. * Home Page: <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/2005/Demo/after/index> In the links to the diferent news: while looking at the code source, I noticed that all of them point to the "info" page. It could be easier to let them point to the beginning of the news, or to the detail of the news. So the user could directly access the story he wants to read. Page structure: I don't understand the page structure after second heading 1 entitled "elsewhere on the Web". The information belnging to that section talks again about information on the City: "more City Parks", and "free penguins". * News Article: <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/2005/Demo/after/info> A heading informing that you are on the news page could be helpful. Which mechanisms have been implemented to help the user find out where he is? In the datatable summarising the answers to the question on favourite organs a "summary" seems to be missing. * Events Page: <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/2005/Demo/after/data> The second data table is not easy to understand. There should be a description of the way columns and rows interact with each other. * Survey Form: <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/2005/Demo/after/form> It's a good idea to number the categories: general information, habits, traffic perception,.... It could also be useful to give each question a number: "where do you live?", "how many cars?". I'm not sure that the mention (this a required field" should be written each time, as the designer writes, at the beginning of the form, that fields with a * are required fields. It makes the reading of the form with a screen reader much longer. Otherwise, I have no remarks on the form. I don't understand why following information is still on the page: "penguins" and "city park". It may loose the user to have such information. As far as page structure is concerned: the headings of the different categories of the form "general information, habits...." are on the same level (level 2) as the headings after the form: "free penguins", "more city parks". Other general remark: the pages are full with information. To make them more accessible, there should be less information on the page.
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